KR OS! THEY ARE DEAD WITHOUT EACHOTHER!!

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KRIYAANSH OS

"THEY ARE DEAD WITHOUT EACHOTHER"

Hope u guys like it!😊

This one if for my sweet devil, MD! Aapka hukum pura hua madam!

This is the first time i wrote something like this so really nervous!

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I stood on the top of my building ready to just jump off...

I couldnt take it anymore. My heart was tired of beating, my lungs would soon stop functioning and my body will be full of blood.

When the heart pains, it pains much more than any dangerous disease in the whole world! A broken heart takes a milliona to heal but for some its more easier to just leave the world. And I was one of those person who thought leaving the world was better.

My life had given me hardships and problems, even though I was always filled with people who wanted to be my friends, I was always lonely. Then came that special one who gave me his TIME, who made me feel special. Who made me his.. But today after seeing him with someone else, I couldnt bear it. Not just going out with someone else infact he even took her on A DATE! He had cheated me, I was cheated again...

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FLASHBACK

I was so happy today!! I was finally going to a date with my Rey after a long time. I called him to wish him good morning. He picked the phone up but I heard a girl's voice from behind. Maybe she was just his sister or someone but the thing Rey said next made me die out of shock.

"Baatcutter, Am sorry! I have promised Taani to take her out to the mall the mall today. Can we please go someother time. Please Baatcutter!" begged Rey.

I agreed but my mood was sad, I felt betrayed but I still trusted him. I knew which mall he was going and followed him. I found him in a restraunt alone with Taani and he actually had the courtesy to HUG HER!

"That bitch! She stole my Linecutter!" I thought

I would have completely loved to murder her right now but I just couldnt believe Rey left me for her...

I ran back home with tears dripping from my face. I cried and cried! But this was it, Rey wasnt mine anymore, He was the reason I lived, he was the love of my life!

I messed up my room, I threw the vase and even broke the frame which contained mine and Rey's picture.

My hands were full of deep red blood, my hair was messed up, my face had become teary and my eyes were burning with fire! I tried to walk but my legs gave up and I broke down!

I slowly drifted off to sleep...

The next day, I didnt get a single message nor a single call from Rey. I couldnt take it anymore, I couldnt keep this inside me! I had to talk to Rey. I grabbed my phone and called him.

"Hi! Hi Kriya" he greeted me.

Now I totally lost it!

"Hi! Goddamnit why cant u just admit it that u dont love me anymore, u love Taani. Am I right? Yes, I am. Thanks for betraying me so much, for breaking my trust and for making die! U are the worst man anyone can love, but I did love u! I was better when I was lonely but now its much worse, thanks for giving me HELL Rey! I trusted u for gods sake" Blurted out Kriya.

"Kriya, Its nothing like that..." Started Rey.

"U know what just stop acting!" shouted Kriya and cut the phone.

Kriya was tired now, tired of living! She had never recieved the love she had always wanted, always craved for. Her dad gave her everything except his time and Rey, he was the first one who made her actually happy but he... just betrayed her in the end. Her mom didnt freaking care about her!

Who the hell should she live for! She has no reason to live! Her heart aches! Her dream's broken! Her love's betrayed!

FLASHBACK ENDS

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REY'S P.O.V

What was wrong with Kriya? How could she even think that I love Taani, How could she even think that I betrayed her!! How? It hurt him, his heart had stopped beating when Kriya told him all this. Why did she do this? Rey couldnt even explain in to her, Taani was his sister but since their parents were divorced he saw her so rarely. But he loved only one girl - Kriya Ghai, his Kriya, his baatcutter, the love of his life.

It hurt him to even see his love crying! It hurt him to even know that he betrayed Baatcutter! It hurt him, it hurt him! He would have loved to go hell but making Kriya sad was something he would never be able to see. His eyes found their way for tears, his hands contained broken glass pieces, his blood oozed out through the pores...

He rushed to the Kriya's house! He knew that she would hurt herself! But there was no way Rey was going to allow that.

Finally he reached Kriya's home. He saw a crowd in front of her house, he went to see what happend. Someone was dead and it was Kriya Ghai...

Rey died! He couldnt bear it! Kriya's body was filled with blood, her face was tear strained and her heart had stopped beating. Rey took her to the hospital, he forgot how to walk, he ran! Not even the fastest runner would have beat Rey this time. In less that 10 minutes, Kriya was in the hospital. Rey screamed and screamed for a doctor! Finally Kriya was taken to the operation theater.

Rey called Rey and just told him three words, " Kriya suicide, hospital."

This was enough for Swayam to understand What the hell had happend. Swayam called everyone and told them the news while he hurried to the hospital..

On the other hand, Rey slided down on the wall. If Kriya was dead, he wouldnt be able to live! He would die in seconds.. He wasnt breathing, his heart had stopped beating and his eyes were only on the operation theater. He prayed and prayed just for Kriya to be alive! If she even survived he would never leave her alone, he would never stop making her feel special, he would never leave her alone and he would never let any tear to even drop from her brown orbs.

The lights were on, hours went by, no news was given!

Swayam ran inside the hospital and saw Rey broken down. Both his best friends were almost dead, he could never see them like this! Why, why had this happend? Kriya suicided and if Kriya was dead, Swayam knew that Rey wouldnt be intrested to live either.

Rey's face had gone blue, his hands were shaking, he hadnt had even a drop of water, his hopes were dying...

Finally, a doctor came from inside the operation theater.

Rey ran to him.

" How is Kriya sir? Please tell me!" he begged

"She is Dead... we tried our best but it didnt work. We are sorry." answered the doctor.

That was all Rey had to hear! He ran out of the hospital and went home.

He broke everything, he threw everything, there was no place which wasnt covered with blood. He walked to the kitchen and found a knife.

He just dashed it in his heart! Rey fell, the knife remained there, everything was spinning, he was going to be with his angel...

In a few minutes, Rey breathed his last, his eyes closed forever, his heart stopped working..

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SWAYAM'S P.O.V

He knew Rey would try to kill himself! He didnt want to loose another friend of his! He couldnt!

He drived as fast as he could to Rey's house and could only see one thing : A dead body of Rey Singhania...

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After 5 hours:

Millions of news reporters and media crowded at Swayam's mansion asking him zillions of questions!

"How did they die?"

"Why did they die?"

"Why didnt u stop them?"

The only answer Swayam could give them was : "They are dead without eachother..."

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Hoped u guys like it!

If u did, please do comment and like pls!

Chappal and jhootas or tomatoes and potatoes! ALL WELCOME!😊

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sharif_lafungi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
tuje kya ho gaya????
itna sadistic os???
ek choti si mu nd both are dead...
i hate it i hate it...
bt i loved the os...so deep nd painful...very unusual from ur normal ones..
grt job
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very emotional one😭
great OS diya

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG
amazing concept
love the storyline
beautifully written
love the whole thing
it was emotional
i just have no words
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg
Such an emotional os
Ise jyaada I cant speak or write any thing about this os
Love it
Edited by kriapatel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
ye kya thaa ek chota sa mu and they are dead
okkk i hate this os but equally i loved it tooo
they way u penned the emotions were fab
awsmm loved it
pls firse sad ending mat denaa
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i hate sad endings.. but it was soo deep
beautifully written.. n yuss without kriya there is no rey n vice versa..

waiting for more work :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thx guys!
Sorry, this time was in a mood to write tragedy 😊
But glad u liked it too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti_arsha

i hate sad endings.. but it was soo deep
beautifully written.. n yuss without kriya there is no rey n vice versa..

waiting for more work :-)

Thx!
Glad u liked it!
Ill pm u everytime
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
u know what i love u a lot..

now this will help me in writting ma OS

well u must be shock nah itna pyaar nd all..??

well ek reason hai i love OS nd stories like this sad types

though i dont write stories like this still

nd this story was so awsum i loved the concept and everything its amazing

i just just truly loved it..

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