Kriya's Diary - KriYaansh SS chp 2 pg 6(updated)

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Kunwar_AJS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
great start dimpy...
i absolutely loved it...how rey came to her house just to know smthing so that he can make her feel spcl..i adored him there..nd the diary part..i cant cmnt on that...u described her feelings her pain nd most importantly her love for him beautifully...
do include rey's pov in evry update..its highly required...abhi edit krke dal..
nd even if we want or not..u hv to ivolve tani's chapter coz its an integral phase...
i loved it..
PS : buddy me

request accept karle😆
and i was sure you will ask for rey's reaction😆😆
and kal daal dungi

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akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

kl nai..aj ki update ka reaction abhi dal...ABHI KE ABHI...tuje rey ka vasta "m a big devil"

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Kunwar_AJS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
kl nai..aj ki update ka reaction abhi dal...ABHI KE ABHI...tuje rey ka vasta "m a big devil"

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please no rey's dhamki aise emotional atyahar nahii🥱

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AimanAsim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

awesome start

want to see rey raection

update soon

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Kunwar_AJS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: AimanAsim
awesome start
want to see rey raection
update soon

Thank you😊

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akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: rey_amar

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please no rey's dhamki aise emotional atyahar nahii🥱

choice is urs little baby

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alex754

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Awesome
I was really speechless at the end
U wrote in a awesome way
#Respect
Great work i just loved it
Kriya's pov it wasnt as though someone is writing
It is as if the kriya character herself is revealing her feelings
Pls if possible pm me when u update

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zona_malik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Awesomeee Dimps

Ahmazinggg

Rey ka reaction fast pleasee

infact it whud be more fun if para ke sath sath rey ka reaction miley else funn whud be spoilt

n yes TR track pe kriya ka reation toh must hai ;)

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SALONI KAPADIA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Zala this iz just Mind Blowing this is just awesome The way you habe described KRIYA'S feeling Her Diary Gosh its just Awesome its Just Mind Blowingly Awesome Oh God I dont have correct words I just Loved it And yus I want Rey's Reaction on it and also Kriya to know Abt Rey and Tani and her reaction it