Godown scene - Improper script and a big let down.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Expected godown scene script to be meaningful and powerful. but i am very disappointed to see Ameeta who is very experienced in this telly industry, write the godown scene, which was the turning point, illogically. Patha nahi what goes wrong with writers when it comes to SwaRon. At times they justify it correctly and at times they make a bizarre of an important scene.


Swayam, when encountered Sharon in such a horrible state is expected yo quickly get a hold of Sharon and rush her to a hospital rather than texting or dialling rey and have flashbacks of ruhi Sharon. And its a basic expectation.


How could writers show ruhi empty an entire bottle of poison in front of Swayam so much so that it spreads to the entire body? It an impossibility. And even after this Swayam did not hurry up but was shown updating KR about the poison issue while Sharon was still lying there.


The script was big let down. I was expecting to see the lover Swayam not a Jasoos Swayam. Don't writers consider pros and cons of a scene? Or they think its okay to give any form of script to viewers? Disappointing then.


Had it not been the hospital scene focusing on Swayam's situation and Shantanu's beautiful acting, i would have been totally disconnected from Swayam. Thank you for focusing on Swayam. It was really needed.

Edited by Anaya.SwaRon - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here i agree with you. The godown scene was really stretched. I felt Swayam was waiting that when Ruhi will give poison to Sharon and when i will go there. CVs could have shown Swayam's entry a quite late. That scene was really disappointing. Swayam who loves Sharon madly was just standing and looking at the whole sceneriao. It gave me a feeling as if I am watching a Saas bahu stuff.

Except of Shantanu's bang on performance and the small car scene, the episode was disconnected for me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I completely agree wit u. .
It was somethin which i also felt. .
Cvs n writers disappoint swaron fans by some or d other way. .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was surely a GO-DOWN scene..

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