The Broken Camera and Joining Hearts-TR OS

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raddhi

@raddhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

It was...
It's nice os
Still find it same 🤢
Anyways whn was ur bday

Edited by raddhi - 11 years ago

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khyati( the pagal )

@khyati2000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

kya baat hai... itna filmy PM... 😆
waise the os was awsum... 😉

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Viji.Chandran

@Viji.Chandran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

really so cute os
really dint understand rey n taani's behaviour
ws lil wierd
bt loved it

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deepkriti

@..Deepkriti..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

IT WAS YOUR HAPPY WALA BIRTHDAY? 😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲..😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲.😲..🤢/🤢/🤢/🤢/🤢🤢//🤢//🤢/🤢/🤢/🤢/🤢/🤢/🤢/🤢/🤢/🤢/🤢/🤢/🤢/🤢/🤢

January mein tha baayfraand😆

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deepkriti

@..Deepkriti..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran
really so cute os
really dint understand rey n taani's behaviour
ws lil wierd
bt loved it

Aaiyo!!😕
sowwiee! From next time I'll try harder to give a better description of character😊

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Crucio.

@Crucio.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: deepkriti

January mein tha baayfraand😆

oh. 😳

toh yeh abhi belated Happy birthday wish karke meko heart attack de rahi thi. 😆

I thought I didn't make my gaarlfraand's bday special!

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deepkriti

@..Deepkriti..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

oh. 😳
toh yeh abhi belated Happy birthday wish karke meko heart attack de rahi thi. 😆
I thought I didn't make my gaarlfraand's bday special!

😆 don't worry b'day har saal aata hai😉

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Crucio.

@Crucio.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Reserved for baayfraand~

Abhi meko painting classes ko jaana hai >.<

I'll unres after i come back!!

-EDITED-

Aw, this was so perfect.

A raw love story - thats the theme I loved about the OS <3

Everything was so rushed, yet perfectly described.

Loved it totally :*

The extra part that u added, to be honest, I don't think that was needed. The incomplete endings is what I love - it sets the reader to think what will happen next. But alright, I loved the added part too.

You have exams nah? So go STUDY, woman. Top karke aana.

Jhanvi Mata ka aashirwaad hai!! ^.^

Edited by Jhanvi_TaaRey - 11 years ago