KR Kriyaansh os: THE MOMENT.. (based on precap)

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KReyAS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

awsome os

loved it

thnx fr ppmm

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Ishana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

This was such an amazing OS.
Loved it. 😃

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srujana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Nice one yaar truly
its vey beautiful and I could completely imagine the scene
good one

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

SHANAYA! 🤗

This was such a treat to read! :D

Ikdummm Per-Feccttt wala treaaat! 🤗

I'm loving this so damn much !

Though a little more description could have been given.. slightly little.

Some parts were extremely good like the part where he apologized and all. that was so beautifully written.

The start was something I love, U breifly defined everything

And that Line Cutter Baat Cutter thing :'D #Memories!

YOU AREE SOOO GOODDD! ^_^ ^_^

It was like the past was replaying itself. The way u wrote it, I could like, Imagine everything, it was right infront of my eyes, EVERY DAMN THING!

Keep Writing and surprising me.

U know I want more frm u.

Baaki, what can I say? U know how great you are as a writer! :D

Lastly, sorry baby! I take a while to review.I open IF fr very less time na..

and basically am a lazy bum :P

Remind me where i have reserved comments and I'll make sure to Unreserve them :)

Sorry fr the bakwaas review . Sorry dear!

Rashi xoxo

Edited by Painted_Sky - 11 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

shanaya🤗

good to c u back🤗

this was such an amazinggg os👏

d emotions wer described beautifullyyy😳

lovedd itt soo much😊

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Aishwarya

@Rictusempra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Awwiee.. A super cute and heacily emotional piece of work !❤️

I liked it? Of course not... I LOVED IT !!! 😃

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Pray_For_Peace

@Pray_For_Peace

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

loved it...I Loved the lines of Rey

all the best for your exams Shanaya😊

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Woowww...
Superb OS indeed..
I so loved d war u were moving to one stituation to other.. Like.. Kria dancing.. Rey drooling.. Den faling n ur lines which were connection d scenes were awwsmmm..
"The Moment" wala part was beautifull writtern..
Finally.. Kahani unki start..
Superb it wajj..
Loved it..