KR Kriyaansh os: THE MOMENT.. (based on precap)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys!!
Ya its meee!!
Okay first of all i am really sorry because of exams and stuff i am not able to give updates..
But just to give a penalty i am here with an os.. And it is A HAPPY OS!
Many of u think i write only sad os..

Ya its a.kriyaansh os.. Seeing the precap i just couldnt stop myself so penned it down and posting it at 1:30 in night..

Well no updates before 10 may..
But i hope you all like it..

This one for all ppl who actually love reading my stuff..

Akansha my dear akku!! This one firstly goes to you for many known and unknown reasons.. I kept my promise of an os.. Hope u like it..

All my devils abhi oopss.. Carino!! And nikki..
And of course the sweetypie tisha..
All my dearies rashi.. Bournvelli.. Magical mania.. And everyone who is supporting me..
Luv ya alll!!!!

PS: guys if you can plz help me send pms and if you like it do share it with your friends.. Thankyou.. :-)

PPS: i am not active so not commenting.. Plz keep sending pms.. Ill comment after may exams :)

Hope u like it..
Thanks.. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally the wait ended.

She was here.

But she didnt meet him...

She wants to wait..
He has to wait..
But maybe..
Destiny doesnt want to wait..

...

A perfect song which was describing her purity, her sincerity and her perfection in being herself was being played.. She was lost in her dance and the soothing voice of A. R. Rehmaan...

When he came..

People say when you miss your loved ones.. There is a possibility that when you see them you get excited.. Hyperventilated..

Is it?

No.

He was calm.. Relieved.. Relaxed.. As if finally the wait was over.. She was here.. His kriya.. His heartbeat beating on her dance beats as she was being as flawless as she can be..

The moment stopped.

He leaned on the door frame.. Not to avoid meeting her.. But just to capture this moment and make himself believe that finally this was not an imagination..

She was here..

Maybe not for him..
But that does not matter..

SHE WAS HERE.

He was actually studying her each and every move when suddenly he felt she was going to fall..
And now THAT.. Cant happen when he was around..

So the wait ended...

She was captured by the most safest and warm embrace she can be in.. Her wait.. Her patience.. Her ignorance..

ALL ENDED..
Just her heart which was at a sudden relief..
Instead of her heart which used to beat crazily at their closeness.. Now was at such a state where only one emotion could be felt..

COMPLETION..
She felt complete..
And finally relieved.. She was doing the ruthless task of avoiding him but now.. He was here with her..
And thats what mattered..

He..?
Well..

He was just surprised to realize that he didnt miss her as much as he thought..

HE JUST MISSED HER 1000 times more than he thought..!

Because when he took a hold of her and just one glance in those beautiful yet elegant eyes..
Made the world stop.
Made the moment perfect.
Made him complete...

Their enchanting moment was broken by a sudden wetness on kriya's cheek..

Kriya was crying..
Kriya was crying..?

NAAAHHH...

Hadnt she already cried enough?

It was rey..
It was his tear which expressed his happiness which words couldnt portray...
She was back..

And now nothing can take her away from him..

Not even SHE..

"rey!"

WOW! His name never sounded so soothing to him.. But today he just wanted to hear it from her.. Like for just about.. A million times?!

She placed her palm on his cheek..
He closed his eyes..
And a tear made its way out...

Realizing the postion they were in rey straightened them but didnt let her go away from him..
Could he?
Of course not!
He pulled her closer as his hand wound around her waist and her one hand on his chest while the other was still resting on his cheek wiping his tear..

"rey.. Why are you crying? Is everything allright..?"

He smiled.. And opened his eyes..
So typical KRIYA! Even in such a situation and such a proximity between them here she was.. Caring about him..
He just couldnt hold back and pulled her in his arms and hugged her with the most force his well toned body could allow..

"i missed you so much!!"

Was all she heard from him..
Is she watching a dream?
Her dream?
Then it would break.. And so would her heart which she cannot allow..
She tried to pull back but he just pulled her closer crushing her against his frame..

"no kriya.. Please baatcutter.. Not now..
I was waiting for this moment since ages!
You.. Went.. Away.. And.. Be.. Beca.. Because of me..!
I.. I am.. So so so sorry!!
i missed you so so so so much!!!
Please.. Just let this moment be..
Dont think about what happened.. Dont think what will happen.. Just be here.. With me.. In this moment.."

And she could hear a choking.. Crying voice of her love..
She just responded the hug as tightly as he did if not more..
And they both just lived the moment..

Tears in closed eyes..
Wide smile on glowing faces..
Their love in their arms..
In that moment..
It was perfect..
And it made their story back to life..

After like the magical moment he heard her say..

"no.."

Rey confusedly broke the hug and looked at her..

"i missed you more!"

And rey couldnt help but smile wide at her..
Botb wiped each other's tears..
And got lost in each other..

That moment passed..

Kriya lowered her lashes and moved back. They realized the moment ended.

But..
But the story had just started..

Rey smiled and walked towards the door. He turned and looked at her emotionally outburst face..
Happiness.. Realization.. Confusion.. Exhausion..
But..
Peace and relief.. And a small smile making her face the most beautiful portrait..

"i am waiting outside in the car.. You collect your stuff i'll drop you and.."

But OFCOURSE! He was interrupted..

"no rey.. Its fine i will.."

But how could she be not interrupted?

"you cant be without being a baatcutter.. Now can you? And about dropping you.. I am not asking you.. I m telling you..! So come out i am waiting.. You see linecutter ko line ke liye bhi wait karna accha nahi lagta..."

He was going when he again turned back..

".. But tumhaare liye to of course wait karna hi padega na..! Phir bhi.. Come fast.. As soon as possible.."

He said witb his million dollar smile..

KRIYA knew that those last words held many meanings.. But tonight she knew one thing..

The moment..
Brought the real rey back..
HER rey back..
And now its just a path of roses.. As the thorns are crossed and removed...




Just a creation...!
Hope it turned out readable..!
princessSonia thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res...
kal unres karungi...
Exams hai JEE ka...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...it waz beautiful...
starting from d dance...
Rey drooling over her...
n dn catching her frm falling...
deir beautiful moment...
d Hug...
Rey crying...
Kriya wiping his tears...
displayed sooo many emotions...
no words for dis scenes...
n dn finally d Baatcutter-Linecutter jodi back...
flawless writing...
lovd it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: reyaditi

wow...it waz beautiful...
starting from d dance...
Rey drooling over her...
n dn catching her frm falling...
deir beautiful moment...
d Hug...
Rey crying...
Kriya wiping his tears...
displayed sooo many emotions...
no words for dis scenes...
n dn finally d Baatcutter-Linecutter jodi back...
flawless writing...
lovd it...



Hey aditi!
Thanks for the appreciation..
Really matters a lot 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lovelylavender



Hey aditi!
Thanks for the appreciation..
Really matters a lot 😊



ur most welcum...
shanaya rite..???
its actually suprb writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome...
awww... linecutter is back...
amazing os...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WAY TO BEAUTIFUL LOVE IT REY N KRIAS THAT LIL CONVO N THEIR DIALOGES JUST TUCH MY HEART
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful
Simple subtle sweet elegant loved it to the core
Amazingly fantastic
Apt for the current track and i hope it happens the same way
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Posted: 11 years ago
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shanaya

amazing yaar

i was feeling as if d whole scene took place in front of my eyes

awesome

👏

😛

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