Swaron OS current track part 3 pg 4

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Hello guys... how are you all... i have been thinking a lot to write on Swaron.. this accident wala acted as a catalyst ...I dont how many patch up Os's i have written till now... par Swaron ka patch up ho hi nahi raha 😆😆 mujhe lagta hai ki sab ko aise story's mein patch up dekhke kush ho jaani chahiye... 😆😆
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This is a OS but im posting it in two parts beacuse i want to post song in another post so jitna jaldi page 2 aayega part 2 bhi aajayegi... 😊😊
And mere storys padne keliye big wala thank you... and jhappi and pappi... iska naam nahi oscvha meine... so any suggestions plsss


Speakers ON... 😊😊

She was screaming.. Hooting for Kriya... She is enjoying this... may because she knew its her and Swayam who were going to dance next...its been ages since they have danced...

Suddenly she feels cocooned in his arms... Even before she could register what was happening she was pushed away... She just looked back to see... It crashed right on his head...

Her breath stopped right away... All her senses stopped functioning... She felt numb... She saw him collapsing...

She ran to him...she held him before he could fall on ground... ..She was not crying...she didn't know what she was doing... she didn't know what she was feeling... She held his head...she could feel blood... she felt her lap pooling with his blood...

That's the moment she looked into his eyes... She didn't find him in pain...she found him relieved.. she found him at peace... She had noticed the faint smile he gave...

Tu mujhe chhod jaaye yeh nahi ho sakta saathiya


Your leaving me, my lover, is not possible



She knew nothing else...nothing else registered in her mind either... How they took him... how they were travelling... All the way to hospital they kept looking at each other...

Meri baaton mein tera zikr sada

Meri yaad mein teri fikra sada

In my talks there's always a mention of You
In my memories, your worry is always there

Gang was screaming... trying to keep him awake... She was not doing anything else...except staring at him... Silently requesting him not to go away...

Main jo bhi hoon tum hi to ho

Mujhe tum se mili apni adaa

I am what I am, it is because of You
From You only, I got my grace

She saw his eyes getting closed... That moment she felt she would loose him forever... not a word came from her mouth... She held his hand tightly...he held it back... she had to leave his hand ...when he was rushed to the room...

Kyonki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi, ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, meraa dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho


Because you alone are,
Now you only are,
life. You're my life.
My peace, and my pain,
you alone are my love..

She sat on the bench...not talking with a soul...everyone else were tensed ...running screaming ...doing all sorts of things... Just the thought of losing him forever... She just closed her eyes not to think...coz she knew.. her heart would stop right away...

Some sense kicked back to her when doctor told them that he was ok... But he might need intense care he need to be taken care of...

Everyone breathed a sigh of relief... Sharon silently went to see him through the window...

She touched the window... . As a silent tear made a way from her eyes.. she closed her eyes...registered that he was fine... He is fine.. She smiled to herself... Her happiness knew no bounds

Tum hi ho, tum hi ho

Arz bhi, mera marz bhi...

Chain bhi, mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
It's only YouMy talks, my decisions (choices)My peace, also my pain

You're my only love now

She wanted to do so many things at atime... She saw her won hand with dried blood... Which reminded her of the accident... Her smile faded away. ... She slowly traced her steps back...

Rey was paying bills... Kriya was talking to doctor... She stood there for long... listening to Kriya's conversation... After they were done...

She went and hugged Rey and Kriya tightly...

They were surprised...they looked at eachother.. they both forgot about her for a moment...

Sharon: Thank you guys... Thank you so much...

Rey and Kriya could feel how vulnerable she was...

He pulled her out of the hug...

Rey: Sharon...tum teek ho... Sharon... Look at me...he is fine...

Kriya: Hqa Sharon... Aap ghabariye mat... he is all right...mere...

Sharon: I know... ...

She left from there... leaving Rey and Kriya... confused and concerned...

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Swayam opened his eyes ..he felt as if his head was tied with some rock...he was unable to move.. Even his vision was blurred...

After few minutes he got back his scenes... It pained like hell... every body part seemed paining,,, he faintly remembered the incident... Even in half conscious state he felt a chill... He remembered him pushing her... And the pain... And her eyes... Just her eyes... He felt a unknown kind of happiness and felt at peace... She was safe...

Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafaa ne mujhko sambhaala
Saare ghamo ko dil se nikaala
Main jo mit bhi gaya to wajood mera
Sada tujh mein rahe zinda... hmm...

I lived for You onlyI've given myself away in this wayYour faithfulness cared for me

It took away all the sadnesses from the heart

Even if I get eradicated, still my existence

Shall remain alive inside You forever

He wondered ,...at the moment...the moment he felt something would happen to her... nothing mattered...his ego...her insults...their fights... all it mattered was her... just her... good or bad he felt this accident made him realize her importance in his life... Made him realize she was and is his life... Nothing else... and he could see... her eyes... How she felt ...

She was nurse noticing him and ..he knew everyone would come to see ..she would come... she would scream... She would even slap he thought... He just smiled to himself..

Everyone entered... There were so many eyes looking at him...he was searching for her...everyone were speaking to him..but ears were dying to hear her voice...

He couldn't see her anywhere...

Rey:Dude...tu ne heart attac de diya yaar sabko..

Kriya: Ha Swayam... How can you do this yaar...

Swayam: Sha... Sharon... kaisi hai...

Kriya: Teek hai who...

Swayam: Who nazar nahi ...aa rahi..

Ruhi: aap ko itna karne ke kya zaroorat thi Swayam... aur ek who hai.. jisne bacahya.. uske aankein khul ne tak intezaar bhi nahi kar saki... who teek hi hogi...

Rey,Kriya,Swayam: RUHI...

Swayam looked at Rey and Kriya who gave blank expressions and fake smiles...

Kyonki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi, ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, meraa dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho


Because you alone are,
Now you only are,
life. You're my life.
My peace, and my pain,
you alone are my love..

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Part2- page 2
Part3- page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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res..

unres..
awesome start
Sharon's pov n shock seeing
Swayam accident
Their way of conveying
emotions
Swayam searching for
Sharon after getting
consciousness

ur aswom di...
Edited by swaronlove001 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start 😊
Sharon's pov n shock seeing Swayam accident😭
Their way of conveying emotions👏
Swayam searching for Sharon after getting consciousness

Lovely penned
Update soon
Edited by SanskritiS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
do update this plsss...
nice os
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
This was beautiful. 👏
Please do continue.😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Can you kill Ruhi please in the next part? :)

Varsh now I'm curious to know what's gonna happen tomorrow 😲

Do continue it sooon! Waiting to see Sharon and her reaction!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was fabulous and well written... on current track...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Can some please kill Ruhi??
Yaar main imagine kar kar ke pareshaan ho gayi ke kal kya hon wala hai
And your OS is just getting me more and more curious
Sharon's reaction was really soe I would love to see even in the episode
Really eager to read ahead
This was AMAZING and now can't wait
Please Update 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful start
do update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sharon's POV.. Very well written.. Would comment after the next update.
Ps:I agree with the others. Pls kill ruhi in the next part

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