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Posted: 12 years ago
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I know many are asking for Love awaits and im here with an OS.
I'll update that tomorrow but a short one as school will start the day after.

Special thanks to snigdha di :*
Enjoy

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That feeling was new. An unknown feeling. The more I ran Away from it, the more it would come back to me. He was a stranger. A complete stranger who I Fell for in the last year of school itself. His eyes, His voice and his killer smile! His personality with a mixture of both bad boy and good caring guy was what struck me the most. He was different. Different from the rest. A guy who has attitude but care, A guy who is cool but not stuck up, A guy who respects women. What more would a girl want. And that's what i wanted. That's WHO I wanted.

He was the most popular guy of school. Knowing each and every person, shaking hands with everyone who went past in school. Whereas me! I was known only by my Friends group. I had been in his class since last year and we hadn't spoke even once. Why would we? We didn't know each other at all and neither did we try to. Reyaansh singhania was his name. Oh I would know! Not that I do alot of research on him but yeah the way his name is said every 2 minutes in class, It's obvious.

I wondered if he knew my name. But what was i thinking! He had headphones stuck onto him each lesson listening to music and if he didn't, he'd be talking across the classroom to his mates. Hugging Ma'am, Asking about her health, taking care off her. Now that's what i loved. His carefree attitude towards his teachers as wel. She wasn't so young, so i didn't mind. It continued like this for a few weeks until that day. The day he spoke. The day WE spoke!

"hey kria, Kria right?"

What? did he just.. did he say hi? To me? Really? Omg! He knows my.. HE KNOWS MY NAME!! The reaction inside me would have been worth watching at that time if they came out.

"Yea.ah"

I kinda blushed. Shit. He was sat opposite me. Why?? My face had gone warm, i could feel it go red. What would he be thinking? I had a roller coaster of emotions inside me at that moment and it was so obvious.

"I actually needed some notes off you as i missed the last lesson. None of these idiots have taken worth reading notes otherwise i'd ask them, so if you don't mind can i?"

I smiled at the way he called them idiots. They were all his friends so it was all good. Even My friends sharon and all the rest were friends with him just me who never spoke. I handed my notes over as he sat there copying the notes cutely onto his notebook. How could one look so cutee while wriitng only??

He snapped his fingers infront of me. I then realised i had been staring at him like an idiot all this time.

"I know im cute but you know sabke saamne aisey ghoor k dekho gi toh acha nai lagta" He said with a wink.

What? could he mind read??

"No.. Erm.. Thanks"

I quickly took my notes off him expecting him to leave but instead he forwarded his hand.

"Reyaansh, u can call me rey"

I shook hands with him. Damn! This feeling created havoc inside my stomach just with the shaking of his hand! GOD!! I blushed and tucked my hair back as he gAve his killer smile in return and left.

"Woah woah woahh!! what was that??"

My friends had started and so had the teasing! They all hugged me as they knew what i was going through at that moment off time. According to them he was so interested! But I chose to ignore it. They continued their teasing as i stood there feeling my face get warm and red.

This feeling was bliss though. I loved the emotions being created everytime i saw him. A week had passed since we spoke and since that week; he frequently said a Hi. In a hurdle of crowd he chose to say Hi only to me. Why? I was happy, excited, feeling the most luckiest person in this world until this feeling cropped up. Yes this UNKNOWN FEELING!

We only had 4 months of school left! Same college or not? Same classes or not? same timings or not? No one knew and even if we did have the same colleges it's not like we'd talk. He had plenty of friends so why would he still remember me? I loved talking to him but i didn't want to at the same time. why? Well because i know what's going to happen. Talking to him meant getting closer to him. Getting closer meant the distances later would hurt even more.

I have opted for the Second easier option like anyone else. I would talk but little in control because its really hard to resist talking and ignoring him I swear and this way; I would maintain a safe distance.

My walls built across was shattering and becoming minute everyday. This restless Unknown Feeling still continued to persist as the talks never ended and the distances only got trammeled.

I sighed on the last day of my school. I need not fight back anymore the heart whelming feel in my heart. I need not fight hard to stay away from him and moreover to lessen the talks.

I can breathe, breathe without the heart warning me of his presence.

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"Hey, hi...", a voice squealed from behind leaving me astounded and I turned around and stared with huge eyes.

Not again!

"Kria..good to see you here in this college", he cheered and hugged me making me feel restless with that Feeling raising in my timid heart again. And yes it was still named, An Unknown Feeling.

So here Ends the OS.
I wanted it to end as just a feeling where none of them know where this feeling will lead them to.

Kindly review
- Shelly 😊
Edited by shelly_Arsha - 12 years ago

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kriapatel thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such a lovely os love krias pov it was beautifully written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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resss


unresss...


shelly..trust me girl..i loved the concept... 😃

i usually dont like open endings but here i loved it...

completly suits the title..unknown feeling...

it was indeed a beautiful piece of work..!!!

lovedd it... beautifulll... 😃


Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome dear...

kriya 's pov was really very nyc and sweet..
loved it..




with love
moumita
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hahahaha!!!
I m literally in luv wid ur os!!
U showd a typical teenager kriya..
And her crush rey..
In the best way..
But WOAHH!!
The last 2-3 lines i was like literally 🤣
and shes lyk NOT AGAIN!!
Hayyyeee such a cute os!!
Luvd it shelly!!
Awweessoommee!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was cute and fabulous os... loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was cute...i really love such concepts...
Nd yeah..even m waiting for love awaits
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its an utterly cute OS !! 😳
The feeling of having your heart flutter everytime you see that one special person !! That undefined feeling !!
U described it so well !!
Love Kriya in this one...a regular fragile hearted school girl !!
So easy to identify with !!
😊
Imagine me pulling your cheeks for writing this one coz it was plain adorable !! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey its amazing... i love the os.. thanks for PM. 😊
Edited by rolisiddhant - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Aww cute n lovely os
Loved it
Kria's pov was amazing
You should write rey's pov too just a suggestion

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