SWARON SHORT STORY KYUN ADHOORI YEH FAIRYTALE(SS)(UPDATED ON PAGE 5) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved this part!!!
pls update soon..
thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: trisha19

Loved this part!!!

pls update soon..
thanks for the pm..

thank u so much,,,,,,,,,,😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Hey i just finished reading both the parts...firstly i want to thank you for considering me worth to read this beautiful work of yours...

Now this os is at a point of events that happend after Rey slapped Swayam...i agree the way it was presented in the show was not that much satisfactory...and here you have created full lot of drama in this scene but kudos to you for explaining all the drama nicely and in a way that we can visualise all the events you are describing...you are really very nice in writing trauma and drama...you rock...

If this is your first work than i really am looking forward to read other works of you in future...for this OS awesome job..thank you for considering me worth sending pm and pms for all the updates...do update soon...

Thanks

Pratik...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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first of all thanks for the PM
this OS was beautiful. i so wanted the things to change back then.
i hope that in this story it does.
i am loving the way the story is taking a shape
update soon

and please do think of making it a SS (short story)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pratik54000

Hey i just finished reading both the parts...firstly i want to thank you for considering me worth to read this beautiful work of yours...

Now this os is at a point of events that happend after Rey slapped Swayam...i agree the way it was presented in the show was not that much satisfactory...and here you have created full lot of drama in this scene but kudos to you for explaining all the drama nicely and in a way that we can visualise all the events you are describing...you are really very nice in writing trauma and drama...you rock...

If this is your first work than i really am looking forward to read other works of you in future...for this OS awesome job..thank you for considering me worth sending pm and pms for all the updates...do update soon...

Thanks

Pratik...


hey pratik...pls dont thank me...i really love your os,ff's as a silent reader😆...so i want u to read my first os thats why i pm you...😊nd im really glad that u like the os...thank u so much😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -spongy-


first of all thanks for the PM
this OS was beautiful. i so wanted the things to change back then.
i hope that in this story it does.
i am loving the way the story is taking a shape
update soon

and please do think of making it a SS (short story)


first of all im really glad that u liked the os...😊...nd i really appreciete your concern about making it a ss rather than os..nd im also thinking that way..so i will surely make it a ss...and thank u so much😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anindo_vrushan


ya i accepted your buddy request...😊...nd will surely send you pm of nxt update...😊

Thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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love it can u pls PM and pls jaldi update next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: armaanasadksg

love it can u pls PM and pls jaldi update next part

thank u so much...nd ya i will update soon and surely pm you dont worry 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys this is next update...and sorry for late update
part 3


LOVE IS IN OUR SOUL
Sharon is getting ready to face aditya khurana...rey is getting to beat aditya as well as mend his relation with his two friends
Rey:-I am a blackspot of friendship...swayam always trust me in everything without doubting my intention once...even usne mera taani ke saath relation ko bhi maan liya...sirf mere liye...ander se uncomfortable tha taani aur mere relation se but usne kabhi bhi mujhe misjudge nahi kiya..ise kehte hai true friendship...swayam mere bhai ne taani ke jaane ke baad mujhe sahara diya...andar se jitna bhi dukhi woh ho taani ke jaane ka..par usne sirf mere liye apne aap ko control kiya...aditya ne kitna ganda game khela Sharon aur mujhe imaginary couple bhi present kar diya duniya ke saamne...passoinaite poster,close dance,itna close step ...chi...agar mai swayam ki jagah hota to ajj swayam se mera dosti kabka tut jaata..swayam ne apni girlfriend and apne best friend ki close picture poster...sabke gossiping about me nd Sharon is areal life couple,apne samne mujhe Sharon ko chuhte huye dekha hai...kaise sahan kiya swayam..kaise...intense loverboy of Sharon joh Sharon ko khud se zyaada pyaar karta hai usne kaise sahan kiya yeh sab god??????kaise...how could I was so insane????maine swayam ke saath aisa kiya...usko aditya jaise ghatiya insaan ke liye misjudge kiya...chi hai mujhpe...I need to meet swayam...woh mujhe maaf kare na kare...mujhe dekhna hai mera bhai thik toh hai???????????please god save my bro...and aditya khurana I will kill you today...wait and watch k***e..k****y...gandi naali ke s***r...i will not spare you...but Sharon kya who bhi mujhe abb apni best friend nahi samajhti...kya maine apne dono best friend kho diya..god...
Swayam comes to sharon house to see her last time...but he don't want to face Sharon. cause he know after seeing her face he cant go anywhere ...Sharon is at her bedroom saying something to herself swayam comes there...swayam saw Sharon is admiring his pics ...and she holds the pics close to her heart...and millons of tears drops from her eyes...
Swayam open the window to listen what she saying...

Sharon:-I love you swayam...please believe me...i didn't broke your trust...maine rey ko humare relationship ke bareme koi bhi batein share nhi kiya swayam plz believe me...yeh sab aditya khurana ka game hai...agar mujhe pehle pata chalta toh main ussko chodti hi nahi uss moron ne mere swayam ko rulaya...swayam main ne woh contract bhi gusse mein ake sign kiya tumhe hurt karne keliye ya tumhe akela karne keliye nahi...nd maine humare camp date mein bhi tumse saach chupaya sirf main tumhara mood kharab nahi karna chahta tha...but I think main ne tumhara life hi ruin kar diya appne presence se...what a worst girlfriend I am...why swayam why do you love me so much...she was crying and screaming hard...

and here swayam opened the window and he heard whole sharons monologue from his own ear...he was so happy and lots of guilty for his action...he was guily that he misjudge his 5 yrs love so easily...he thought Sharon don't love him...nd Sharon broke his trust so easily nd after sharons self confession swayam was felling so pathetic...he was so much puzzled what to do...and the clause of London dance academy was also buzzing him...the clause was he will have to come London within 2 days in any condition neither they will cancel his admission...and they will enlist swayam as a blacklisted student...those people cant apply for this academy in future...he was confused,happy,guilty,hurt...but as he know sharon loves him madly...all other fellings overpower his felling of love,...
He want to hug Sharon at the moment...want to take her close to his heart where she belongs...want to kiss her till eternity...all the fellings,their confession,dates was continuously revolving in his mind...he was so much happy...

Here unaware of swayams presence in her room Sharon now stopped her crying...and she left the room for bathroom...

Swayam wanted to talk to Sharon and want to hug her tight but a call change everything...swayam got a call from London school of dance that if he didn't join now they will enlist swayam as a blacklisted student and he cant ever apply fo this institution ever...nd his flight is within 1.30 hrs...swayam was fully confused what to do...sharon is in a depression..he need to clear all their misunderstandings...but he cant leave London school of dance's oppourtunity too...cause as he got to know Sharon loves him so much..he just wanted to be a successful person to fulfill her every wish...but something occur on his mind...his disrespect to sharons love comes to his mind...how pathetically he misjudged her the thing was killng him from inside..thus true loverboy comes back once again in swayam...Swayam got to know sharon's love and he wants to stay with sharon but he has leave for london for dance institute join karne ke liye and now he is confused all the way the thing is that sharon loved him more then himself and what he have done he didnt trusted her and hurted her to the core so he think that he isn't right one for Sharon
Swayam: if i stay here in her life she will suffer with me i rather leave her for her sake and I have to leave for london for dance institute and thus he left from there...and go to his house and packed his stuff fastly and left for airport after giving two letter to ramu kaka..one for Sharon...and other one for rey...

swayam is seating at Mumbai airport and lost in his world of sharon and tears are continuosly shedding from his eyes...he is felling too much weak mentally and physically..thus his boarding time occurs..and he boards for british airways flight no A-765...and he is now sitted in flight...and flights crew members airhostress and pilots were preparing for flights take off...thus flights was running in the track for takeoff...its 2nd lap 3 more lap left for take off...airhostress instructing all the passengers to switch off their phones and networking devices as they have to take off...suddenly swayam got a call from rey...firstly he didn't want to pick that..but after few sec ..he gots msg too from rey to pick his call as it's a emergency situation and related to Sharon...swayam is numb to hear this...flight is in 4th lap to take off...R to swayam convo
Rey:swayam I know im a culprit and u don't need me..but mere bhai please comeback nahito Sharon ko tu zindagi bhar keliye kho dega...swayam is in icu...and she have life risk too bro...please come back...she is in Appolo Grengals hospital Mumbai...
Swayam:rey woh abhi thik toh hai na..tears are brimming in swayam's eye once again...
Rey:swayam don't know bro...doctors are also clueless..and Sharon continuously chanting your name bro in her unconscious mind...doctors are saying u need to be here at the moment for Sharon..neither she might collapse too...
Swayam:rey stop it...sharon cant die ...swayam shouts loudly...all the passengers stare at swayam confusedly..air hostress comes to swayam and ask him to switch off his phone...swayam tell her just wait for few minutes he will do that...airhostress left from there
Swayam to rey :
Swayam:rey im coming don t worry...meri Sharon sirf meri hai...god too don't have any right on her...mere rehte meri Sharon ko kuch nahi ho sakta..
Rey:but tu hai kaha bro...and itni awaaz kyun hai udhar..
Swayam:im in flight ..and its ready to take off..
Rey:what...rey shouts...toh abb tu kaise ayega?????????
Swayam:jab mamla pyaar ka ho toh rasta khud baa khud nikal aate hai mere bhai..
Rey:but how?
Swayam:just leave that to me..and cut the call..i will talk to you in taxi...
Rey cuts the call...swayam made a plan...
Swayam:help help ..please help ..he cries ...and thus he keep his hand in his hearts...and shouts loudly...and then sit se gir jaate hai...
Airhostress runs to him and ask him
Ah:sir what happened ?are u ok sir?
Swayam:nope ...im felling pathetic..please stop this flight...im felling too much pain in my upper chest...please do something...
Ah:sir wait...take deep breath...I will be back..
Thus air hostress run back to crew members and pilots & co-pilots...
And inform them about this...but till then flight had taken off from base..its in mid-air,...pilots informs airpot authority for emergency landing cause it's a medical emergency of a passenger...and after few minutes the flight landed back in Mumbai...airport medical team runs towards swayam...and they started their examination...swayam is restless how to get out of this and go to his Sharon.,...he push onne ground staff and started running ..all the crew members ,ground staff and doctors team runs behind him.,...but swayam is too fast to being catched by them...swayam came out of the terminal and pick a taxi...
On Otherside sharon's condition is going worser by every passing time phrase...doctors are running..nurses too...gang is in full shock..rey is also crying...he is clueless what to do...as in he knows Sharon main medicine is swayam...swayam is taxi,rey and gang is in hospital and Sharon is fighting for her life as in physically cause mentally she lost all interest in life...her facial expression symbolize that .in her unconscious state...



Precap:Revealation of what was there in swayams letter for that Sharon is in that condition...rey and swayam patchup...swaron intense,emotional breakdown patchup...Shareyam's plan to destroy aditya khurana completely...mr.gautam raiprakash's entry...will gang comes to know swaron relation?

Edited by anindo_vrushan - 11 years ago

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