Bhare Naina- KriYaansh VM+OS

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Anvesha

@..ANVESHA..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Lovely vm n amazing os!!!!!!!

Never seen or read something like this before!!!!!!!

The vm was just heart touching... its really beautiful the way u have portrayed kriya's feelings !!!!!

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Karishma

@Mystique.Kishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

res...this time i plan to comment on one of your posts.

UNRESED

Unlike Sarah, i did not cry. I was rejoicing while reading this. Because after what feels like ages, did I find some semblance of sanity, some measure of connectivity to Kriyansh. The kriyansh in this one-shot. I always applaud people who write one-shots surrounding a song. Because I know its damn hard. But what you and Sarah did is completely out of the box and well...SO YOU!😊

the vm was beautiful sarah.

When she had finished her performance, she had gotten down the stage with a miniscule hope. That at least she'd be awarded with remembrance.

This bit was so beautiful. Kria is intelligent. She won't hope for Rey to jump into her arms. But she hoped to be remembered by him👏

And then the ending where Kria makes peace with Reyansh's aloof behavior though after a battle with her heart. It made sense. yeah, I know I am repeating the same thing again and again. But trust me, sense is the only thing I want Kriyansh to have right now.

If CVs gave me even half as much angst as is in this one shot,I will happily take back all the curses I threw their way.

much love,kishi

Edited by luvarsha20 - 11 years ago

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k.sweet

@k.sweet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

amazing work

n beautifully written

vm was superb

thanks for the pm

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Sneha

@Arsha_Arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Wow... it was hell emotional vm... specially after v r able 2 c our mushy mushy kr in d3 now a days... the vm sooo sooo depict the feelings and emotion of the os

It was mindblowing...

Edited by Arsha_Arshi - 11 years ago

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Sneha

@Arsha_Arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Wow... it was hell emotional vm nd os... specially after v r able 2 c our mushy mushy kr in d3 now a days... the vm sooo sooo depict the feelings and emotion of the os

It was mindblowing...