KR OS: Reminiscing Love

hawww pehle ress pe mera haq thaaa 😡


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Vaish..kya baat hai choriii... 😃

I'm loving what you are writing these days over the present track in your own way that too without watching D3 actually... 😃


I loved it..

I loved how u showed Rey's confusion b/w his mind and heart... how things were soo confusing for him...

How much frustrated Kriya was with Rey's behaviour... She knew all this has been creating havocs in both of them...

how much difficult it was becoming for them with each passing day..passing moment...


that crave...that longingness to feel each other could be felt all over...


and when they started dancing..OMG..it gave the feel of Haaye Rama + Rain Dance together... which felt heaven...


Love finally won over all the things.. :D

I loved it..

as always beautiful... 🤗

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Okay I'm really sorry for not unresing before.
It was a beautiful update, with all the emotions brought out perfectly. I love the detailing and the way you've penned their fight with their inner selves.

The realisation was blissful and the dance exquisite and impactful.

The lyrics were a perfect match complimenting the entire os ridiculously well.

That one line about how she had triumphed and he had lost broke my heart, but the line that followed about how in love they won together brought a huge smile to my face.

I absolutely adored it. Keep writing and thanks for the pm.

Nice os supab lovely concept u explian kr pov very well

give us 1 reason of not liking it...it was too gud...pehle to song zabardast...us par KR dancing..wah wah...okay on a serious note...i loved UR monologue on love...(dii apko kitna experience hai love me...!!!!!!)...rey's pov was well penned...end was lovable...overall its ur one of the best

Even i was gonna ask you the same question that achanak kya hogaya hai tuje back to the d3 os's?
but tere pass ans hi nai hai :p

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Amazing os...loved it
It was a bliss to read this one
great job vaishu

aah i love that song...its just one of those sukoon denewala song hai <3

i loved the fact that rey thought it was more than "like" thing for him
and their inner turmoil was beautifully explained

nicely written
thanx for the pm

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Matlab toh now i can surely expect d3 os's from u as and when the story progress in the show :p

Hey dat was superb
Very well written

Wowww..
Vaish di.. Awsmmm OS...
HAIIYYEEE ONE MORE ON D3 TRACK... Awsssmmm...
I so loved it...

The start was good . The way you showed them dancing and he couldn't help but feel the exact emotions rushing towards her ...like once she had felt ... It is necessary naa ...It depicts his overlying feelings wants him to be the old rey ^_^Dekh "Like " word use matt kar ... Like ekdum teency weency crushie types sound karta ...use something similar to affecting her or something ... The flow of the words is perfect and seamless ...you have expressed everything with calmness and composure ...like it should beanxiety mein koi soch nai pata ...and calmness will give him the surity of his feelings !I loved Kria's turmoil more ..it gives a diff edge to the story...she is trying to change , she wants to change for him ... she is distancing herself from him so that she doesn't hurt her ...the way you have portrayed the she wants him to keep faith in her ... and how she is putting her every cent in it is amazing ... it clearly portrays how much she loves himAND I LOVED those bold line s...you know it adds fuel to the story ... It conveys what their souls are saying...Its beautifullland I am glad you showed the willingness pouring in him with the passing movement and I love the symbolism you used to convey the same ...Its khoobsoorat
Vaishhuuu Hayyeee the end was so heart wrenchingly beautiful <3 ...It was the best part of the entire OS ..the way you expressed his present state , how he wanted answers from her and morever himself nd that dint allow him to leave was beautiful...and you are damn good at writing mellow tharki ...I am not good at understanding dance moves in write ups but I did understand the way you wrote with subtleness and composure ...and the proximity they shared and how their hearts mingled up ...it left a tingling sensation in my heart .I loved the end...so unique and untouched ...the way he spoke ilu ...and she did hear him and his smile <3It was so khoobsoorat!