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Its Thanksgiving Day today guys... and I would like to say Thankyou to each and every friend and readers...

Thanks for being there and helping me to be what I am today...

Okay here is an OS which is somewhat taken on current or you can say current plot in my way... Hope you guys like it...


And Madhu i do remember few months back you have asked me to write something on D3 plot so consider this a small version of that...

let me make it clear in advance their is going to be involvement of other female character in this OS though i have not taken any particular name so you guys are free to imagine anyone..

Do give it a try guys...


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"I can't come with you Rey.." she paused and looked into his eyes which didn't believed her words, trying to decipher any lie in them. But he couldn't, all he could see her lips, expressions and eyes were in synch... yes today she said it clear to him, trying his luck for one more time he questioned her...

"why? why are you doing this to 'us'..."

"Because this is what is meant to be Rey... 'US' was never their when we were together, this is it..." she slides her palms from his hold and stepped back towards hall where functions were going on...

the last thing which left his choking throat was... "I will be waiting for you no matter what you decide.." his blurry vision saw her vanishing behind those yellow lights and golden curtains...

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He opened his eyes with jerk.. "Oh!! God its hard..." he rested his palms on eyes wiping that one lone tear,recalling what he just saw in his flashback... no it was not a dream it was like re-living what he have gone through in last two days..

"I was here for my Ex's engagement and look what i got to bump in... My Ex-Ex girlfriend.." he chuckled a bit mocking the way his life turned upside down in last days.. Looking up in the space... " You are so unfair Dude, Why? Are These repercussion of Loving two ladies?" getting no answer back he scorned and then looked at flight information digital board... His flight is showing the sign of delayed..

he cursed the O' Hare International airport (Chicago) system..."I thought this happens only in India but.. No Chicago is also on same platter.."

"Useless..." he sunk in his chair waiting for some new announcements...and closed his eyelids for some peace but what he got again??


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He stood there watching through corridors window everyone was making merry time, enjoying the gags which were being pulled on the would be groom and bride slash his ex girlfriend slash going to be someone else's fiance...

"Gosh... why can't she understand..." knuckling his fist he punched the wall... but felt a hand stopping him from going for second punch...


"Reyaansh...stop it, You are going to hurt yourself..." she uttered lowering his fist and meeting his caramel brown eyes...


"And you think your presence will do any good to my already bleeding heart?" she averted her eyes away from his strong hatered filled gaze...

"come on answer me... You know what, Its all your fault,If you wasn't their in my life in first place then all this thing would not be have happened... neither i would have fallen for you, nor did you left me wounded wondering what was my mistake in all this, and nor she would have come to make me believe again in love... Its your fault Kriya Ghai..All yours." he gripped her by arms and shrugged her accusing her of his miserable life...

"I know you hate me for this..." is all what she said while having a water line on her eyelashes...


It still affected him, those tears still slit his heart even after almost a year of spending of trying to hate her every day, every second she still matters to him... because she holds a special niche in his heart which nobody could ever replace...

His thumbs rubbed softly those drops from her eyes and then he turned back on his heels leaving her there alone... but something stopped him, her cracking voice...


"I...I didn't came here to rehash the past.." she replied to that unspoken question which he has in him since the moment she appeared...

He faced her guilt stricken form, her eyes bored in floor her hands fidgeting with duppatta...

"Today seeing you like this reminded me, that the most perfect act of love is 'sacrifice'..."


"I...I love you Reyaansh Singhania, I think I have since the first moment we locked our eyes on that New year eve dance." her emotions deceived her, how much she tried to hold back those tears they flowed every time her lips quivered with words...

Bridging the gap between them she took hold of his hands in hers and ran her sweaty warm fingers on them... " Its gonna suck, But If you want is for me to let go.Then I'm gonna do that.."

"Stay Happy Rey.. I want that with all my heart.."


She left his hands and wiping her tears she gave him an awkward smile implicating it to be a 'Goodbye'..


Her last statements proved him that she always loved him, but then why she said all those meany things on that very fateful night.. he needed answers and he have every right to know... after all no matter he has moved on with someone else or no matter how much he deny this,she always was and still is somewhere in him...

"Why did you leave me kriya back than?" reyaansh eyes were red due to frustration and all the heaviness in his head and heart...

She gave him a sad smile...

"You know everytime i am asleep I have this dream where, we're back in that room... And you were there for pre-valentines proposal, And every single time I say 'Yes'." she opened up about the dream through which she wanted that her past could be rectified...


"Its just a dream... Right?" his eyebrows were arced showing her its difficult for him to take it true.


She nodded approvingly... "Its my dream.."

reyaansh crossed his arms deciding what to say..."I don't hate you. And can never, I remember the first time I ever saw you.. All skinny arms and tangled hairs with anger on nose ..It was hard letting you go Kriya." he took a deep sigh after that, finally relieving a stone which was on him since the time she left him to wail all alone.

"Its was hard losing you, kriya and It was hard seeing you again... Its still, Really hard.."


"I have right to know what went wrong kriya... least you can do is answer me..." he demanded her.


" It doesn't matter Reyaansh, you have a new life maybe... we should bury that night there only." saying so she tried to escape the talks, but he was fast enough for her.Knocking her adjacent to wall he showed her his fierce side..

"I demand the reasons... don't make me do anything which i shouldn't be doing to knack them out of you..." she knew this wild strike of his... and quietly obliged by nodding.

He let her go easy and settled by her side on near by chairs..

"Mom... hated dance..." she started with everything... he was just lending his ears to her today... " She.. came to knew about me dancing and about..about 'Us'." her eyes blinked back those unshed tears to get going in flow and she told him everything not missing any details of why's and what's he might be having.


"And this was all about it... I had to leave and do that reyaansh it was best at that time.." she mouthed that, feeling light after confessing her deeds.


All he could think of was... " You could have told me this, May be we could have talked about it.. If necessary I was ready to leave everything and anything for it...If it counts 'Dance' too..."


she passed him a genuine smile... shining between her silent tears..." That's what I never wanted for you... because it was special more than anything else.. dance got us together and I never wanted it to be ended..."

she left from there joining the grooms family because she was amongst their side...


and next he saw was.. His present Ex slipping a diamond ring in her fiance's finger..


He still was in bizarre what was making him go giddy? was it the truth he learnt right now? or the engagement which took place... in those lost thought he decided to leave the venue as soon as possible...

"Its high time I go for a vacation.."

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"Hey.. son is this seat vacant?" reyaansh heard a fading voice making him open his drowsy eyelids... he witnessed a grey haired man standing on his right asking for the seat on which rey's luggage was lying...

He nodded his head and picking up his travel bag he murmured... "Sorry.. for keeping you wait..."


Old man flashed his teeth while making himself comfortable... "No... son, sorry to wake you up... looks like you were in deep dreams.."

"Yeah.. not dreams, just thoughts of someone or their were two someones..." he was still in his reverie..making that old man go confused...


"Sorry what??"


"Nothing... just random thoughts..." reyaansh cleared it being not of importance...


That old man grinned at him..." when it is love, how can it be 'Nothing' son..." he understood what might be troubling rey..

"How do you know?" rey's eyes went wide.


"Uh-hu it surely is love.." he patted reyaansh's shoulder gesturing him to continue...

Rey gave a slight head move.." Yeah it is... and two time fallen 'kingdom of love' will be correct..."

Old man winced and twitched his nose...

Reyaansh laughed at his reaction..." two ladies whom i loved may be I still love, one left me and her dreams for fulfilling dreams and desires of others.. and other one left me because she thought I was pushing her to be someone who she wasn't, May be she was right but I only wanted her to have a dream and ambition of her ownself..." rey summarized his love tale in merely few lines...

"I guess I was always at wrong front...and now they both showed up together to mingle my already calloused brain with some sort of stupidity.. " he sulked at those thoughts.


Old man observed the chaos in which rey was stuck in... He reached to his pockets and take out two cards waving them infront of rey...


"These are two cards... one queen of hearts and other queen of clubs, chose one and it will tell you which way to go.." that grey haired man flashed two cards and juggled them on coffee table asking rey to pick one...

"Huuu... no i mean how can a card can decide it..." rey was uberly in state of surprise..

"come on... two queens, two choices.. and I would say just follow the heart.." old guy winked at him...

"I don't know... Its just insane..." rey threw his hands in air...


"Okay here it is son...I don't know you know this or not but The one important thing in love is, 'Finding the right person for spending life with'...and 'Love finds you son, you don't find love.' so come on pick one..." he again shuffled the two cards on table...

Rey closed his eyes making his mind about both the women he loved.. yeah he came in terms with it, the two woman does have their special position in his heart and now to chose whom will be his heart lead...

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He saw himself entering home, with her favorite Purple orchids bouquet..." Happy anniversary wifey!!!" he waved those flowers announcing his arrival...

"Go back out Rey..." Kriya yelled from their room, making him grin.

"Why?? Is there anyother man here again?" he raised his eyebrows in sarcasm...

She peeked out from door hinges and replied... "No... he just jumped out of window wearing his pants to come back with my favorite orchids wrapped up for our anniversary gift.." she tweaked her tongue out teasing him...

Moving out & coming face to face towards him, she was looking like tease in those washed denims and white see-through button up shirt..." hey Hubby!! happy anniversary..." she wrapped her arms around his neck...


"Umm... Happy anniversary Kriya!!!" he embraced her from her tiny waist...and she meshed their lips in a quelling heart felt Kiss...

He indicated her to flowers in his hand... " for me?? Ohh they are beautiful Reyaansh..." she was surely in mood to make him go bonkers today with her sudden enticing manner and postures...

She was arranging those flowers in vase and he flowed her..." you know I can't believe it has been a year we are married now..." he said her.

"Time flies when you can wish for it to stay.." she catcalled these words fanning her hot breathe on his nape...

"So this is what you wished for kriya?" he played with her fingers braiding them in his and a smirk spread across his jawline...

she locked her eyes with him..." If i am gonna say this is more than what i ever wished for so you will make fun of me and call me a dork or some brainless bird.."

He chortled at her... " Um-hmm.. yeah..."

"then call me.. because yes it is.." she beamed with happiness and pecked him on nose...


"I...made us a reservation for dinner tonight.." he said his plans for their anniversary celebration..


She pouted cutely..." actually I was thinking of you and me staying at house with a quiet dinner, kissing a bit... snuggling a bit..." she raised her eyes in hope...

"And... their may some feast for you like me wrapped in lingerie under this jeans.. and you rocking it..." she pursed her lips making him think what she just said...He looked at her bottoms in jeans and replied..

"I think I will sit down.." reyaansh made his move making her go cynical in pools of wicked laughter...

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He sat down on couch with a deep sigh..." what happened you Okay?" she emerged from kitchen holding a flower vase..

"yeah...you look nice by the way.." reyaansh looked at her from top to bottom clad in simple black saree...


She smiled politely..."Thanks...but still I am not ready yet completely..." she brushed her fingers through her hairs...


"Doesn't matter.." he answered her..


She blushed at that..." how come after a year of being married you are still so sweet to me.."


he calmly replied to it..."Because you are you... and you deserve it, after what I did to you for making you go beyond your wishes, so you surely deserve to be cherished..."


She came forward to his lounge chair and leaning over him she kissed him..." you have already made up for it.. all through these years rey..." she sweetly fondled her thumbs around his cheek...

"Ahh.. I should probably get ready for the party..." she declared it while moving towards their room...


"Hey..." rey said to her making her turn...


"Its easy? wasn't for you?"


"yeah...when you are with me, its easiest thing to get over with..." she said the last line while disappearing behind doors...

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Reyaansh Opened his eyes after seeing the two girls he loved and it was a sneak into life which he will be having with both of them respectively...


"So... made your mind son?" that old man asked reyaansh...


To which he just meekly uttered a yes...and then pointing towards a card on left side he poked it towards that man..." This is the one..." he was determined of it...

"You sure?"

Reyaansh just turned the card upside down and a grin rested his face... he was beaming..


"Well..well, looks like you found your queen..." old man smirked at him..


rey ran his hands through hairs feeling somewhat shy..

"Not many do... so how did you find your queen?"

"I guess, I always knew..." rey confessed and showed him the another ticket he had bought earlier making that old man laugh..

Rey took out his smartphone dialing her number he prayed silently she pick up the call... and his prayers answered...

"Hey!! Its me, look I am at the airport.. and I have two tickets for British Columbia, Canada..." he paused for a second...

"Do you wanna spend rest of your life with me?"

and he cut the call... taking his place again... he was now impatient not knowing whether she will come or not..


"So... you will get married?" that same stranger who somehow told rey in those trivial talks what he needs to do asked him..

"I hope so... only if she will show up.." this feeling of wait was making him nervous...

Old guy unfolded his newspaper and said.." She will show up definitely..."

"I don't know..may be yes.. somewhere I too have this feeling.." rey looked towards announcement board checking what is timing of his flight, but it still shows delayed adjacent to his flight name...

"I will tell you something son, love has little bit to do with destiny, fate and stars...alot more than simple things what we smart people think we know about it but these are the facts at which women are good than we are.." rey showed his ear to ear grin at his words..

"You see love doesn't knock twice and when it does make sure you open the doors... and you had a chance so you made a choice.."

"And i would say you made a good one.." he waggled his fingers at rey and then started getting up for his flight boarding which just announced...

"And why do you say that?" reyaansh knitted his brows in question...


"Because she showed up..." old man motioned him at back and left after patting rey's shoulder... "And she is pretty.." he winked...



Reyaansh turned his head, his lips curved in a beautiful smile on envisaging her panicky self.. she was there with her red duffel bag, her hairs messed and tangled up with runner shoes... he recalled the first time he met her...

He advanced his hurried steps towards her and got her bombarding at him..

"You are such an Idiot, jerk...You can't call a girl from airport proposing her..." she clutched his collar tightly.

Reyaansh crept his hands on her lower back supporting her from tumbling down..."I know..I know this sounds crazy..But.."

"You don't know you are the biggest crazy and mess Reyaansh Singhania... But you are my mess..." she had those small tears brimming up her eyes...with a gleaming smile adorning her elegant face..

"And I love you..." she admitted it.


"I love you too.. Kriya!!!" he leaned in for a soft engaging of their lips...sealing her with a promise of being together for forever...

She meshed her hands at his back with his hairs and he lifted her, sweeping off floor... He nuzzled more into her hairs and caressed her nose button with his..

"Ready to view Whistler's snow?" he asked her...

"With you.. Always.." she pecked his lips again... and they heard announcement for their flight... reyaansh saw the signs changing on flight board from delayed to arrived...He laughed at irony of what god has done today...

"You are my lady luck Kriya..." he grabbed their luggage, placing his hand around her waist they moved towards boarding area..


And Reyaansh took that card, Queens of heart... having a glance of it he kept that in his back pocket knowing someday he will tell kriya story about this card and this retrieval of love... But right now the most important thing is he have found his queen of heart...


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The End





Parts
in bold font is rey's conversation with his ex-girlfriend other than Kriya, and he did imagined his future life with both the girls..
Hope its not that confusing...

Sorry for mistakes and errors...

and Fingers crossed hoping u guys like this version of Kriya's way in rey's life...

Do hit the like button and review, i would love to read them...

thanku for reading..

-pallavi.😊








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Ocean.eyes thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazinggg os di

u toh already know my review abt this...

Me loved it so much

and that old man really actd as cupid <3

aww queen of hearts
haaayee

amazingly written
and rey ka proposing style toh khatarnakly superb tha
awesomee

great job
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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*Res*
*Unres*

Wah!!! Udhar hume KR mile N yahan hume OS mila , Lucky Me 😎...
Shuru mein thori konfusing hui But bad mein sab kuch clear ho gaya 😉...

Bechara Rey phasing in between his Ex-Gf and Double Ex-GF 🤣...
Kya kismat hai Rey ki , 2 larkian life mein ai N abhi dono he 'Ex' 😆...
Meeting your Previous GF on your nai nai Ex-Gf's engagement , Not good...
KR's Truth infolding scene . Emotional types tha ...

Inn sab k baad bechare ka Vacation pe jana toh banta tha 😆...
Bhala ho uss Uncle ka , jisne usski help ki...
Rey's 'Future Imagination' , Bohat fast hai , udhar bithe baithe he Imagining...
Ah!!! Kria k baar mein toh bara Romantic types socha tha 😉...
N uss se I could imagine k unki aage ki life kesi hogi 😛 🤣...

The best part - Proposal...
KR anokhe and unka proposal bhi anokha 😆...
No Lovely-Dovely types , Seedha point ki baat...
N already Hyper Kria ko double Hyper kar dita 🤣...

And then they started their now journey , together ...
Superb si 😃
Loveedd It ❤️

It feel great to see u back in action 🤗
Edited by Roxxy47 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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super awesome
loved it
i really liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
reserve
unreserve

another work by you 😃
right now i am having a 32 teeth smile 😃

loved the OS
unique as always.. it was so well written..
amazing..

- sorry i have to study for my exam, so i am giving a short comment -

PS. when are you planning to PM all your works..
i have read them but want all the links in my inbox *puppy face*

Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing os...
loved d way u showed rey's POV n d way he was caught between his 1st ex n 2nd ex...
old man helping rey find his true love was nice.. convo of old man n rey was superb..
loved how rey made his decision n d way he was thinking how his life ll b with both ladies n he chose queen of hearts aww...
called kria to come to airport n proposed her in phone was cute n funny... loved d proposal part of them.. awesome os..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was beautiful and wonderful os... loved it... brilliant well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it and by the way are u a fan of one tree hill
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is just so beautiful ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was beautiful and wonderful and fantastic oneshot... loved it

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