SWARON BACK TO SCHOOL DAYZ :CHAPTER 3 - zabaan sambhaalke !!! - Page 4

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Congo PP tu dazzler ban gayi 🥳

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Res. .
Unres. .
Omg PP am rofling like mad here. .
U never fail to surprise me n make me laugh like anything. .
Dis was mind blowing brilliant piece of work. .

Oye mein kisi shanti ko Nahi janta 🤣 🤣
Dis scene is d best funny scene of d3 n my most favourite scene. .
I laugh like mad Wen i see it n ur os reminded me of it again. .

Swayam ke man mein laddu phuta , par bahar se vohbilkul nahi tuta 🤣
Dis one was superb again. .

Not only these two Der were so many dialogues which just cracked me like anything 🤣
As i always say ur d best best best comic writer yaar. .
U nailed it once again. .
Ur shayari n poems were fab. .
Dis os reminded me of so many swaron scenes too as u had put in some dialogues. .
Brilliant. .
Loved it to d core. .
Dil khush kar ditta yaar 🤗

Finally i am reading this...baby ...u r blessed with this amazing comic timing...the humor in your write ups is not OTT...it goes with the flow...loved everyone being true to their character ..from the attitude wali Sharon...SRK ka bhoot wala Swayam...tapori bharat...straight forward Kriya ...filmy Neha...love struck Rey ...every D3 character has its own beauty and u successfully portrayed them without loosing the basic essence...amazing character design...

Loved Swayam ka Main hoon na wala problem...khud gana chalne lagta he n all 😆...gosh...that song was awesome...just like u ...👏

The romeo -juliet touch to SwaRon was cute yet deep...loved it..Sharon melting at Swayam's words...praising him and Swayam giving her tashan was cutely done...

I liked the way u kept gang active and funny ..Rinni's sudden intellectual version was nicely done...




So agar ek line me bolna he toh...you simply ROCK baby🤗❤️

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Finally i am reading this...baby ...u r blessed with this amazing comic timing...the humor in your write ups is not OTT...it goes with the flow...loved everyone being true to their character ..from the attitude wali Sharon...SRK ka bhoot wala Swayam...tapori bharat...straight forward Kriya ...filmy Neha...love struck Rey ...every D3 character has its own beauty and u successfully portrayed them without loosing the basic essence...amazing character design...

Loved Swayam ka Main hoon na wala problem...khud gana chalne lagta he n all 😆...gosh...that soch was awesome...just like u ...👏

The romeo -juliet touch to SwaRon was cute yet deep...loved it..Sharon melting at Swayam's words...praising him and Swayam giving her tashan was cutely done...

I liked the way u kept gang active and funny ..Rinni's sudden intellectual version was nicely done...


So agar ek line me bolna he toh...you simply ROCK baby🤗❤️