SWARON BACK TO SCHOOL DAYZ :CHAPTER 3 - zabaan sambhaalke !!!

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

res

unres

aapne update kiya hum dhanyay ho gye 😡

😆😆 thanx for updating

now coming to OS...it was awesome and comic as usual 😉

EVERYTHING TURNED DIZZY...THE WORLD SEEMED BUSY

i really love this line...

then STATUE 🤣🤣🤣

Bharat ki tapori language 🤣

Swayam ka SRK ka Style ☺️

wo song with how dare u ka touch 🤣

Rinni ki smartness 🤣 or shld i say cheating 🤣

Romeo nd Juliet

i love the way Sharon continued after Swayam

it was awesome DOLL...i enjoyed it a lot se bhi zyada...u r such an amazing comic writer.

keep writing more nd wo bhi jaldi 😡

u knw na how much i love reading ur updates...so wait krana is a bad habit 😆

LOVE U 🤗🤗🤗

Edited by muskan108 - 11 years ago

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -spongy-
well iss bar toh tere RES ki zarurat hi nahi padi
maine khud ne hi RES kar liya 😉😉

but ab tune itni mehnat se RES kiya hain toh i'll definitely use it...
aacha ek aur baat listen add the link to the first part of the OS...
it might help people...

Thankie for the RES 😳😳😳
love you ❤️
🤗

PS. confusion hain ??? 😕😕😕
tu hamesha new posts kyun banati hain ?? [?]
i mean why not continue int he same post ???

aree coz i write new chapter in every update , n its not connected concept same hai chapters nahi .bollywood series is connected thats tru iss liye maine thjread nikala aur tere liye res bhi kiya par tune koi reply hi nahi mara

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: nidhi1998
Aadarniya sanskruti
aapki prashansa karne keliye
hamare paas shabd kam pad rahe hain.
hum aapse atyant prasann hai.
is katha ke sare kirdaar hame
dilchasp lage
khaskar adhyapak pritam pyaare ka.
aur hame sabse haasyajank baat
swayam ka ganne laga
bichara pyaar ka maara
aur swaron ki rasaayan(chemistry)
yeh kahani adhbhoot aur nirali hai
yeh ek dukhi man ko bhi khush kar sakti hai
muje bahot achi lagi
aapne aisi rachna ki
jisse meri hasi rukh hi na paye.

dhanyavaad
nidhi

oh my ram ji , thank u soo much that was such an amzing reply , m soo very glad u liked it :)

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: swaronlove001
res

unres

waooo its a very nic update...

loved it...

nd songs are aswom...

update soon

thank u soo much bhai ! 😆

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: nkss
res
unres
OMG sanskruti!!
wat can i say ??
by the end of your OS i was just like 🤣
the song (ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga) was superb😆
and yeah the 'shanti' joke is one of my fav jokes..chaahe koi kuch bhi kahe maanna padhega
that it is a classic joke..we use it a lot in our class..
you got some FREAKIN' AMAZING talent of bringing a huge smile
on everyone's face with your light-hearted writing..
keep using this talent and write more awesome OS' like this one
LOVED this OS..
Thanks for the PM

m soo glad u enjoyed it soo much 😃

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Rupita
Dat was nice...n dat song was too gud ( ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga )...+ previous n in whole os taani only had one dailogue says hey krishna ji...

Just one question- kaunse class ka aapne inhe dikhaya hai? They actually play STATUE...🤣🤣🤣

thank you so very much 😳

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Rupita
Dat was nice...n dat song was too gud ( ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga )...+ previous n in whole os taani only had one dailogue says hey krishna ji...

Just one question- kaunse class ka aapne inhe dikhaya hai? They actually play STATUE...🤣🤣🤣

thank u soo much

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sadafarsha
Woah
Sans r u serious i mean i read it two tyms then am commenting
It was awsum amazing zabardast out of this worls just perfect
I just luved it alooot se bhi bohat zyada
U really made me w8 for this update alooot
And am damn sure u will make me w8 again for another update aswell
And i think i will be able to read my next part after my exams only
Gonna miss u and ur work alooot 😭
Wah rinni toh bilkul meri jaisi nikli 🤣
I luved everyones reaction after rinni's action 😭
It was seriously very awsum
Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm me
Thanx for the pm

eppp i love u di alot se bhi zyada 😳🤗

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Doll🤗
pehle to update ke liye thanks I so wanted to read this one further
coming to the update It was brilliant as usual
superb comic timing and dhaaasu punches
Suddenly everything turned dizzy the world seemed busy

I loved this line and the Main hoon Naa Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa lagaa sece was just 😆 lagta hai swayam SRK se kuch zyaada hi prabhaavit rehta hai.
The statue part was hilarious and the PP sir and MB convo was light and funny too.Loved the majnu swayam ka Your wish is my command and thar shaanti dialogue is my favourite too.I loved it.
I loved the apun bola too It was so apt there and then Rinni ka answer even I was shocked but I knew kuch ghapla zarur hoga aur waisa hi hua chit and all🤣sahi raaste pe hai ladki🤣.Loved the swayam romeo and sharon juliet waala part kitne compatible hai dono😆
The last part was awesome too.
I loved this one re.
Your updates make me smile and laugh dil khol no matter ow sick I am.Love yo doll
next update jaldi
Sorry for chotu sa comment I am not well doll But I wanted to comment jaldi se
Luv
Hershey Dii