SWARON OS: IN MEMORIAM - Page 3

Beautiful concept medha very emotional very touching.. It striked a chord deep in my heart and I could feel swayam and sharon's grief and pain of losing out on their parenthood and the agony of losing their child after being born..
Amazingly portrayed emotions of swayam and sharon you left me spellbound..
I'm really happy with the happy ending I'm glad swayam and sharon got their parenthood back in the form of savera..😊.

Originally posted by: cenation123

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God first of all to charan sparsh
I dont cry or get emotinal that easily
but this shook me to the core
WHat a wonderful piece of writing
I have read swaron as parents before,Sharon miscarriage before too but never have i ever read sharon delievering a baby that died before anyone could see her.
It was painfully beautiful.
The way you have penned down their drams and hopes I was dreaming with them.The way they were waiting for the pari I was waiting with them too.The way they felt hollow when they lost her I felt hollow too.The way they were attached to her I was too.It was like I was their with them.I loved both Swayam and Sharon's POV.Perfectly written for expecting couple.It was so realistic.I loved the ending the ending even more.Savera the new morning to the night called Pari.The symbolism and metaphor was again WOW.It was just breath taking and heart wrenching yet the positive ending was what I loved the most A bright smile amongst thousand tears...
P.S.i need PM for this

Luv
Harshi

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

oye---pm to bheja tha----😕

thanks for the feedback harshi---i wait for your comment----because i need to know what my sis says about my strange strange topics.😆 kya karu dimmaag mein yehi aaya.

aur charan sparsh toh mai tera karu-----i hope i can write like u someday⭐️

😲😲😲
you wish you could write like me🤢
kaha mai👎🏼 kaha aap👍🏼
diii I wish I could write like you someday
I want to be able to make the readers emotional and cry too but never happens
but mai seekh rahi hu aap se and deep dii se😈mai bhi seekh ke hi rahungi😆😉


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Hey Medha 😊

Originally posted by: prateekdave7

I dont know what to say..it was just Amazing..Such a deep emotional work..I just loved it..I am not emotional at all but ur OS made me cry when SwaRon lost their first child..It was painfully beautifull description..Seriously its so long that i am commenting on any written work due to lack of time but after reading i cant stop myself to comment here..Loved the way u potrayed SwaRon's beautifull dreams regarding to their first baby..Loved the both sharon and swayam POV..And last love the ending part..It was happy and blissfull ending..loved the name selection Savera..Its like har raat ke baad ek savera aata hai..So pari came back as a savera..(i just loved this thought)

Keep it up megha..And sorry for not commenting on ur previous work..But i will comment soon..

Thanx for PM

Prateek

that was just good and great... speechless and heart touch touch... loved it

Amazing OS 😊

Originally posted by: Tan.vish.K

You are evil

Really very evil...😵

You seriously got me into tears today...

The topic you chose to write on was heart wrenching..

This topic has been really close to my heart as someone very close to me has been through the same thing...

I have seen them go through it and could completely relate to each and everything mentioned here..

You nailed it yet again...

The uniqueness in your writing and the style is something that touches one's heart..

I can't actually pin point that this particular thing was good or something because I would be wrong in picking out the best out of the best..

Really loved it

And a big thank you for a happy ending

Waiting to read more from you more often 😃

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

no problem prateek----i know people are busy---i'm glad u liked my work, and let me know about it.😊

and by the way---i'm medha---not megha.😛

Oh sorry..Medha..😊
i just slipped ur name..😆and got confused between gha and dha..

wow..!! medha di..!!
it was amazing...beautiful and totally out of the world..!!
mein aaj tak nai samajh paayi ki aapke thoughts hmesha itte pure beautiful and mesmerizing kaise hote hai..
ur truly a portrait of true reality medha di..
totally amazing beautiful out of the world Os..
i just loved it..
while reading it my eyes were filled with tears but after i read it..
i can't help it but stare it its beauty in awe...
stare ate your beautiful thoughts and imagination in awe..
u totally left be numb and speechles...
heads of to u..
i could just say...
ur amazing...
and for the OS...
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KHOOBSOORAT...