SWARON OS: IN MEMORIAM

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

You are evil

Really very evil...😵

You seriously got me into tears today...

The topic you chose to write on was heart wrenching..

This topic has been really close to my heart as someone very close to me has been through the same thing...

I have seen them go through it and could completely relate to each and everything mentioned here..

You nailed it yet again...

The uniqueness in your writing and the style is something that touches one's heart..

I can't actually pin point that this particular thing was good or something because I would be wrong in picking out the best out of the best..

Really loved it

And a big thank you for a happy ending

Waiting to read more from you more often 😃

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Heena

@kamlesh32

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

This os was so deep, heart touching and beautiful! I loved the concept and how you described the emotions of shareyam. Amazing job.

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Medha what do i say...i just cried cried ...cried i just cant express the way i felt after reading it..it felt so real...so. emotional...just loved it 😊😊 i duuno dear i cant express more take a bow😊😊

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Whomst

@Angel-luvs-s

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Oh my God medha... do you have any idea how beautiful this words...I am totally speechless. Pari was dead I knew when i was reading but it was like I don't want her to die I was honestly near tears but thank God you gave it a Happy ending...so wonderful and beautiful at the Same time...thank you for letting me read this

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Shivani

@shivheena123

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

being honest, Medha i love your writing. You are great! This story was put so well and i almost cried. I loved it and the last line was so powerful! I don't have words to really describe this one but wow! That is all i can say! Keep writing!

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

I dont know what to say..it was just Amazing..Such a deep emotional work..I just loved it..I am not emotional at all but ur OS made me cry when SwaRon lost their first child..It was painfully beautifull description..Seriously its so long that i am commenting on any written work due to lack of time but after reading i cant stop myself to comment here..Loved the way u potrayed SwaRon's beautifull dreams regarding to their first baby..Loved the both sharon and swayam POV..And last love the ending part..It was happy and blissfull ending..loved the name selection Savera..Its like har raat ke baad ek savera aata hai..So pari came back as a savera..(i just loved this thought)

Keep it up megha..And sorry for not commenting on ur previous work..But i will comment soon..

Thanx for PM

Prateek

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Just amazing
Thanks for the pm
You are an amazing writer

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

It was definately master peice in work.
Execution of all emotion in dis OS was superb.
It was heart touchy OS

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
This is not at all fair Medha...every time you write something so beautifully...i can't place it...what is the the most amazing part of your writing...your unique style of writing...the heart wrenching topics you choose to write on...that marvelous execution...that special something..which touches readers heart...it soothes it...it squeezes it...when i was reading their dreams about pari...a silent tear rolled down my cheek...still a painful smile crept on my face...when a life grows inside you and you start dreaming about it...weaving the dreams on a colorful future...and suddenly that dream has been snatched from you...those moments of pain...dead hopes...lifeless hearts...time heals all the wounds...loved the way you gave Swayam..sharon and Rey 's POV...love the way you write girl...you are just mesmerizing ...

oh my god deepu----i am actually glad that i managed to make u cry...😆

and you know what is the best part about your replies? your summing up of the concept----girl in your short reply, you manage to convey the basis of the os better than me in so few words.

thanks for the reply----and delighted that a writer like you liked my work..😃

love ya---medha