Swaron os: current track prt 2 pg3,note pg 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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<font size="6">This is my first write-up, so plz bear with all my mistakes.
It is on current scenario and may be i am not able to give justice to it so plz bear with it and do give it a read.
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Sharon : u knw ashi wo relationship kitni useless ho jati hai jab hum kisi no body ke saath uske baare mein discuss kare nd uske saath apne pain share kare,hai na swayam?.
Ashi : par aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai ki wo no body kisi ke liye useless ho but kisi aur ke liye bahut special.
This line had added fuel to the fire,Sharon's anger was now out of control, her eyes were burning with fire by now. It was clearly visible that a hare has invited a hungry tigeress.
Sharon : How dare u? u answered me back..u answered bck to Sharon Rai Prakash? U don't even know who i am? just because i hav changed does not means the diva is death, bahut special samajhti ho na aapne aapko..now u wait and watch tht wht i cn do.She throwed more of her cold words on poor ashi and gave furious luks to swayam and lft tht place.
Swayam didn't like, the way the things were heading and realized if ,the diva ,SRP is back it would be a trouble for all.So he ran after her.
Swayam : sharon just calm down,its neither good for ur health, nor others and ashi.Uski kya galti hai..y u involving her and shouting like anything at her.
Sharon was happy at seeing a concerned swayam back after a long time,she was just about to turn and hug him with all her love but suddenly she heard ashi and that was all.She was back to her angry mood again.
Sharon: oh toh Mr. Swayam shekhawat yaha mere liye nhi aaya hai, wo us us us ashi ke liye hai because i shouted at her.I am so sorry mr.Shekhawat i shouted on a person who is so special to u.
this time swayam couldn't control and he was upset with the continuos venoms that sharon was throwing
Swayam: sharon tum samjhti kya ho apne aap ko?
he was cut in between by her.</font>
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<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="6">Sharon: Mat bhulo swayam mai wahi Sharon Rai prakash hu jise tum baat karne se bhi daarte the.</font>
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="6">Swayam : i am sorry to say miss rai prakash par mai vo swayam shekhawat nhi hu jo tumse baat karne se daarta tha.</font>
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<font size="6">so guyz how was it??
criticism',appreciation and everything welcomed open heartened...plz do comment and let me knw.
silent readers don't forgt to hit the like tab😊</font>
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey nice os but very very short..
Pls continue it na..
Started reading usse pehle toh khatam ho gaya..
Par jitna bhi u wrote it was very gud..
Ur first attempt very nicely done..
Update it soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was good one yaar...
The part u added b/w was great..
Continue soon..:)

Sakshi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i will give a little bit of an honest opinion. It was nice but it was kinda short. And there was nothing exactly new as we had seen something very similar to this in yesterdays episode. Maybe adding something new to this and making it a little longer would make it better. just a frank opinion.

but as a first attempt, it was really good. do continue. :)


and those forum codes were quite disturbing while reading. so try to mend that as well :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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do continue dear
N yeh update tha ki promo
Update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was good
but bohot chota tha continue soon
do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was nice start bt kinda short

then to i love it
Do pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey it was a really nice start and I liked it.
Please update soon.😃
Edited by VruShan_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONCEPT GOOD START... DO CONTINUE SOON AND PM ME
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
It was nice. But small. Please continue and update soon.
I was so willing to read a os on current track,so plz do write it fast.

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