Swaron os: current track prt 2 pg3,note pg 5

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

finally some what they sort out their mu... swayan and sharon are back together...
loved it... they are go for team activities ... look forward to read more...
do continue soon and pm me

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Sunil

@Suni1986

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

U did perfect job

by posting in another post

By d way update was Nice nd Lovely👏

Edited by Suni1986 - 12 years ago

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Ur first attempt at writing was great..👍🏼.
Defintely continue karna chahiye but make your updates a lil long na chotu sa tha 1st chp or else its pretty nice..😃.
I loved how sharon expressed her feelings in the second part and am happy things are back to normal between swaron show main kab hoga god knows u write good though..😊.

Do pm me when you continue..😊

Edited by sweet16cash - 12 years ago

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Awesome update
Finally swaron sorted out everything
Waiting for next part

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awww both the parts were very cute :)
Nicely penned the confession part.
Pm me next time.

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sneha_sharon

@sneha_sharon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Note:
Thankyou for the lovely response people,i am overwhelmed with this as it was my first work not to great but thank for ur precious comments :) Unfortunately i am not going to write more to it and only reason that the current track is damm annoying that i have lost my interest in writting this!! Sorry if anyone is hurted(but i guess no one will be cauz i am not an amazing writer...lol ;) )