By Your Side (Sharon's Monologue) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Payal beautifully written there. Nd I exactly wanted to see this. But sadly in the show Sharon is being shown thinking how Swayam had been selfish. I ws completely okay with the fi8 if nly things wud hav turnd out this way. I still hope that Sharon will hav a similar monologue that u have written here after she cools down. Keeping my fingers crossed. Very nycly written.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

Payal beautifully written there. Nd I exactly wanted to see this. But sadly in the show Sharon is being shown thinking how Swayam had been selfish. I ws completely okay with the fi8 if nly things wud hav turnd out this way. I still hope that Sharon will hav a similar monologue that u have written here after she cools down. Keeping my fingers crossed. Very nycly written.

I doubt CV's will ever show something good
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow
it was beautiful
can you please please please
PM it to me
i want to keep it in my inbox
it was so good !!!

loved it 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetangelpayal

She flopped herself down on her bean bag, and wiped off the streams of tears falling down her face. His words kept ringing in her ears "toh uske paas relationship todne ke alawa aur koi option nahi bachta". She remembered how pale his face looked when he had said that, so unlike her face which had reddened due to all the crying.

She couldn't believe it that he said that. Sure, they had fought, broken up earlier. But this time when he said that, she felt his voice crack. She realized how difficult it must have been for him to say that. How difficult she was being to him!

That moment, it seemed to her that he had given up. He was so exasperated of running around, making others happy, making her happy, that somehow, their friends, her, and he himself had forgotten about his happiness

. And her mind went in a frizzy thinking of all the things he had been through in the past few days. It told her so many things at a time, that she couldn't think anything. It's one of those moments when you have so many things going on in your head, that your mind goes blank. And then, she felt a pang in her heart. Slowly, his picture flashed in her mind, when he had held her hand and made that promise during their Camping Date. Oh how adorable he looked with that smile!


THIS is exactly what should be happening in the show rite now!! THIS is the beauty of Sharon's character and the true essence of Swaron relation.
Beautiful piece honestly :) :)

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