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sakshi gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

Both the updates were just freaking awesome! !

Superb work!!👏

The emotions, care nd love are just perfectly shown in ur os !!😳😊

Awesome! ! Keep writing! !😳

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Varada

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome is the word! Sharon n Swayam are SwaRon again..😆😳 The way you portrayed everything, was just amazing!👏Waiting for the epilogue.. I wonder what's in store for us readers!😲

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VruShan_MaNan

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG I don't have words for these last 2 chapters.

I can't even tell you how much I loved them.❤️

Brilliantly written.👏

Sharon and Swayam's pain was portrayed so beautifully

Thank you so much for writing this beautiful story.🤗

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medha

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Posted: 12 years ago

love it love it love it, varshi.

but tell me something---rey toh bike leke chala gay...swayam ko car keys de gaya hai na?

nahi toh these two lovebirds will have to hitch hike and come back----i'm not complaining--it might be romantic.:P

it was such a lively update---loved the netire swaron convo.

fantastically written.

love--medha

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Posted: 12 years ago

varshu dii🤗
awesome awesome awesome
I loved the emotional convo but for me the highlight was sharon's letter it was perfect and then swayam ka bike stunt😆
fir the hug haaye I to loved it diii
Mazaaa aa gaya

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Divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

amazing update dear...totally loved it... 😊

loved every part of it... 😊

cont writing..hoping to get to read mre frm u... 😊

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Kanchi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Both de parts were superb
Luvd it
Amazingly written

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Sanskriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely update 😊

Beautifully penned

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