Swaron two shot....Akhri Alvidaupdated part 3&4 pg 9

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

wow wow dis was absolutely awesome 👏
Loved every bit of it..
Read dis mornin mornin n u made my day yaar..
Loved it completely..
From sharon.s dance her pain to swayam.s concern his feelings his pain..
Reyam convo swaron convo..
Sharon.s letter n den finally swaron uniting again..
Happy ending.. I so loved each n everything..
Everything was just perfect nd amazingly written..
Thanks for pm..

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

You have written it so flawlessly...,.i am at loss of words...amazingly written...

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

no words to describe the feeling... both the chapters were just amazing
and perfect ending... but happiness of 😭 and loved it

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

I just loved this two shot!!!

all the parts are really amazing...👏

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Shweta

@addicted_love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Wow a double Update !! 😊
Both the parts were amazing !!! 😊
I loved Sharon's Dance waala part .. nd the song selection was so apt ! 😊
And Sharon's letter to swayam was so beautiful and emotional ! 😊
Thank you so much for giving a Happy Ending ! 😊 I had khushi ke aasoon in my eyes ! 😊

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

wow double updates..
simply awesome..
loved it alot ..
sharon dance n pain she was going through was awesome..
swayam concern ,reyam part,swaron convo was amazing..
loved sharon letter..
n finally swaron are together..
the most awesome one..
happy ending..
thanks for the pm :)

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SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

OMG varshu this was commendable...Both the updates were Fab...& thankgod swaron ka patch up karwa diya ...It was very well written...Loved it to the core...Now plz update the epilogue asap...Can't wait for it...