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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Part 1 was fabulous...👏

de letter was beautifully written by swayam..👍🏼

it bt tears in ma eyes...😭

amazingly written...

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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

De second part was superb

luvd it...

nd nw sharon is gng to jhodhpur to get her swayam bck

can w8 to read de nxt part

amazingly written

thnx 4 de pm

update soon

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Read both parts in one go
Thnx for the pm
Do update next chapter soon

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

RES

UNRES

my god this was amazing

from the start the letter to rey was damn emotional

wow !!!

and then the emotions of sharon were so well written

i was actually feeling the pain

the way the part continued and the emotions of each and every person..

wow !!

BUT EK SHIKAYAT HAIN..

DI THODA REACTION TOH DIKHATE JAB SABKO PATA CHALA KI WOH DONO RELATIONSHIP MAIN HAIN 🤔

anyway leaving that..

in the end sharon ki entry in churidar !!! 😉

killer !!!! 😈

hosh udd gyae sab ke 😆

waiting for the next update eagerly

this is getting me so excited...

thanks for the PM

please update as soon as possible

and do PM me 😊

im waiting 😃

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Shweta

@addicted_love

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Amazing update yaar !!!! 😊
I could so feel sharon's pain... I literally cried...
Update soon yaar... 😛

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Awesome OS!!!

the letters are really heart touching...

loved both the parts...

pls update soon...

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Heena

@kamlesh32

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Amazing update! I felt really bad for sharon...but im also feeling bad for swayam. Please update soon!

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Awesome update 😊

Beautifully penned

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

it was awesome

I read both the parts and they were nice

thanks for the pm

plz update the next part soon

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

amazing dear... 😊
loved d way u have described everything...specially ending letter...
plz cont soon... 😊

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