Swaron two shot....Akhri Alvidaupdated part 3&4 pg 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh gosh am so touched n feeling so emotional after reading swayam.s letter..
Varshu brilliant yaar..
Wat a thought n d way u wrote letter was amazing..
Pls continue soon i wanna see Wat sharon does now n Wats in rey.s letter too..
I just can't wait.. Update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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varshu its amazing part yaar...
I litterly love it
update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
omg swayam left
shit noo plzz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys thank u for such a lovely response 🤗 maine bahut saare logo ko rula diya...im really scared to post this part...i hope i have lived up to your expectations... i have increases the length...it will be finished in two more parts which i will post to day only😊😊 hope u guys will like it..😊😊

PART-2

Hi Rey,

Ek last baar milna tha Rey... Tumhe pata hai rey i always wanted a brother jiske saath i could share anything and rely on him for anything...and trust him ...and who will trust me...no matter what... When we became friends mujhe pata chal gaya tha k i have got my bro... Rey actually i cant even put in words the support you gave me..when ever i needed you...just one fight or slap cannot revert back the trust i have in you...but it is sad that i dint gain that back from you... may be sab ke expectations pe khade nahi ho paya mein...

Rey I just wanna say Thank you... You are my bro and you will always be...

Sharon ka khayal rakhna...

Swayam...

After reading his letter Rey has just dropped down on the floor...crying holding the letter...

Rey: Im sorry Swayam...ek baar mil letha yaar...Im really sorry...tum nahi swayam...i don't deserve a friend like you...i don't...agar Swayam...agar uss thappad ke liye tumhe mujhe mar bhi leta that will be very less...

he started banging his hand on the ground just to be stopped by the guys...

Everyone got tears looking at Rey...

Rey just remembered Sharon...just to see her sitting numb in a corner...without any expression...

Rey: Sharon...

No response...

Simmi: Sharon...kya hua...kya likha letter mein??

She was not even responding...

Simmi: Sharon...kya hua say sometime thing...

"Relationship tod ne ki alawa kuch choice nahi bachtaa Sharon"

"So thod do sab kuch"

" Yeh mein nahi tumkeh rahi ho"

" Ha mein hi keh rahi hoon"..happy""

"Im sorry Sharon...mein tumhari expectations pe khade nahi ho paya"

" As much i want you...more than that i want you to be happy"...

"So im leaving"

Simmi: Sharon...Sharon...

Simmi shook Sharon out of her trance...

Sharon: Swa...Swayam...how can he...how can he just... i have to stop him...

She stood up to run from RH Simmi stopped her...

Simmi: Sharon...calm down...babes kya bol rahi ho...

Sharon: Simmi just leave me...i have to stop me...he got it all wrong...

Simmi: Sharon...kya bol rahi ho...sharon just listen to me...

Sharon started screaming...

Sharon: Are you out of ur mind...he is going...i have to stop him...leave me

Rey came forward and shook Sharon...

Rey: Sharon woh chala gaya hai...he has left us...y don't u understand...

Sharon: HOW DARE YOU...DONT EVEN TAKE HIS NAME...HOW CAN HE LEAVE ME...

She started screaming...on top of her voice... he held rey's collar...

Sharon: HOW DARE U SAY HE LEFT ME...HE WILL NEVER LEAVE ME...I WILL NOT LET HIM LEAVE ME...HOW CAN HE...HOW WILL I LIVE WITHOUT HIM

She has crumpled down to floor...and started crying screaming his name...hugging Rey...

Sharon: Mein uske ke bina kaise... Kuch karo pls...mein mar jaungi...pls i need him...mar jaungi mein...

Entire gang except simmi was shocked with sharon's reaction to swayam's letter...they understood that both were in a relationship..none of the couldn't hold back their tears...they went to hug her...

Sharon: Simmi...Rinni...bolo na...usse ...come back to me...imein mar jaaungi...SWAYAMMM...pls don't leave me ...

Sharon: bharat...tumhara har baat maantha hai na swayam...pls...pls usse bulao...pls...

She just started weeping badly...just then she has started coughing again...

Siimmi and Rey got scared and went to her...Simmi went to check for her inhaler...

Rey: Sharon...calmdown...pls..meri baat suno.sharon...

Sharon.: I'll die...I need Swayam...she said coughing... i want him...ask him to come back to me...\she said coughing and finding difficult to breathe,...before becoming unconscious...

Rey: Sharon...sharon...guys...ambulance ko bulao jaldi...

They took her to hospital...which simmi told she visits for her regular check up...

Where doctor has informed that this is the major attack she has got in months...doctor even expressed his surprise that asthma which dint affect her doing so many dance routines...affected her now...she has asked them to keep her out of stress for some days...

Rey remembered how Sharon got a attack scolding him and

"Thik thi main...Swayam ne thik kiya mujhe..."

Rey: Sab kuch mere wajhe se hua hai...sab kuch...itna andha kaise ho gaya mein... Oh god...Swayam ek chance tho de detha yaar...ab main kya karun...o god...

He tried calling Swayam's number which was not reachable...

Just then he heard that Sharon got her consciousness back...he signalled simmi to go to see her he dint want to face her and make her go mad again...he saw from the glass how lifeless Sharon became...she held simmi and rinni and started crying again...they tried calming her down...but nothing worked...

It is been two days no one them were able to do anything...Sharon got discharged from hospital...they got more offers but none of them were in a condition to accept any offer...they have missed Swayam a lot...Swayam...who did all the base work for them...who has always made sure that everyone was happy...was not around them...

Sharon was not in a condition to even think anything...Simmi and Rinni moved into her house to take care of her...she just kept staring at his memories or she was crying...in this way doctor has told that her health can go worse...

Rey has got really scared he even ttried getting information from Taani abot swayam but nothing worked...

Rey: mujhe Sharon ko iss situation se bahar lana hi hoga...

He went to Sharon's house just to see her sitting like a lifeless soul...

Rey: Sharon...

Sharon just looked at him and and turned hr faceback

Sharon: kyun aaye ho rey...look i don't even have strength to scream at u...pls leave...

Rey: Sharon look...

Sharon: rey just leave...

Rey: nahi Sharon...aajmein kahunga jo kehna hai muje...sharon mujhe nahi pata kit um dono ke beech mein kya hua hai...agar swayam humhe especially tumhe chod ke chala gaya hai... if something major would have not happened he would have never done this...

Sharon remembered how she in anger told him to break the relation...Tears started pouring out from her eyes...

Rey: Sharon...knowing you agar tumne kuch aisa galat kaha ya kiya jis se swayam to itna bura laga...

Sharon looked at him...and started crying...

Rey: Sharon...jo hua woh hua...sharon..

Sharon: i have hurt him so much..so much that he doesn't even wanna be with me any more... sab meri galti hai...i ts all my fault...

She said crying...

Rey:Sharon...Sharon...look at me

Rey: Tumne usse jitna door karne ki koshish ko...he always stood by your side...he has put more than 100% in your relationship from start...he was always with you...ab tumharei baari Sharon...agar woh tumse gussa hua tho kay...root gaya tho kya...manao usse...its ur turn now Sharon...let this relation not break...u guys are meant to be...u should fight for it...think abt it...

Sharon looked at Rey...he was true...it was swayam always who held on to relationship...who made them strong...she has never done anything much to save the relation more than breaking his heart...

Rey: Its time for u to do something for him...to show him what he means to you...to show what he is to you...

Sharon: You are right...i will not let him break this relation...i will not lose him...i will fight for my love...i will

She went and hugged Rey

Sharon: thank u ...but this doesn't mean i forgave u...

Rey: i know...We should hurry...

Sharon: par mein...swayam ko kaha dhundo...oh god...

Rey: wahi ek baar...woh kaha hai woh pata chale na...

Sharon: i know what to do...tumhara phone do...

Rey: Mere phone??...ok

Sharon took Rey's phone and dialled Swayam's fathers number...

Rishi Shekhawat: Hello Rey...long time

Sharon: Sir its Sharon...

RS: Sharon...long time beta...how are you...

Sharon: Not good sir...aapke help chahiye...

RS: Kya hua...

Sharon : Swayam kaha hai sir...mujhe pata hai ki Swayam ne aapko mana kiya hoga...but pls aap batayiye ki woh kaha hai...

RS: Beta...par...

Sharon : Sir... I know...par woh mujhse gussa ho key aha se chala gaya hai...its all my fault... pls sir i love him a lot...nahi jee paungi uske bina... bas ek baar milna hai usse...

RS: Sharon..sharon...beta...look calm down,...Aj agar tum nahi hot ii would have never got close to my son... tumhe itna request karne ki zaroorat nahi hai...woh jodhpur mein hai...he will be going to abroad after a week...

Sharon: Thank u sir...thank u so much...

RS: take care beta...and ha...kisi ko saath mein leke jaana...nahi tho jodhpur mein problem hoga...

Sharon smiled and said bye to him and kept the phone...and turned to Rey

Sharon: Jodhpur...

Rey: jodhpur...

So Sharon has decided to go to Jodhpur...and Rey begged her to ket him accompany her as she was not well when gang came to know about it they all jumped into the plan that they want to come to help them as well as D3 cant be D3 anymore without their pillar swayam in it...

They have decided to assemble in the night to start for jodhpur...

Everyone gathered except for Sharon...

Rey: Simmi , Rinni tum dono ko nahi lagta...tumhe Indian kapde pehni chahiye...kyun ki...u know..

Simmi,Rinni: what ?? are u mad...

Rinni: yeh hi baat Sharon ko bolo...maregi tujhe

They all saw Sharon coming in a chudidhar...

All got shocked...and Rey gave a smirk to Rinni and Simmi...

Simmi: Sharon tum Indian...

Rinni: ha...how...

Sharon: girls tum itne dumb ho kya...hum jodhpur ja rahe hai and...i don't want to feel akward or do any goof ups there...

Simmi,Rinni: par hum dono ka kya...

Rey: raaste mein shopping karke...fast shopping karke nikalte hai...what say...

Meanwhile Swayam was very was feeling lonely...he came to jodhpur to visit his mother and grandparents and he tried to forget all his pains...

How much ever he tried he could never forget Sharon...but he always calmed himself thinking that whatever he did is for her happiness... and its high time he wanted some space for himself... and he tried being alone spending time with his family

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh gosh first part mein i controlled my tears but dis part it actually made me cry seeing sharon so broken..
Amazing amazing yaar..
Very well written..
Am loving dis os varshu..
I so wish ki sharon searches for swayam in d show also after he is gayab..
Update soon..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Awesome part dii
it was so emotional
I loved it
Poor sharon swayam ke bina kyaa haal bna liya
Papa shekhawat waala twist mast tha
sharon in chudidaar waah
I cant wait for the next update update soon dii
varshu dii🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
OMG I loveee you for this update.🤗
Seriously how I wish you were the writer of D3. 😃
Loveddd this update so much.
I mean this is what I wanted to see, Sharon realizing her love for Swayam and fighting to win him back.
And the whole D3 is going to Jodhpur, wopppieieee this is going to be fun.
and Sharon Indian dress- Hmmm sasural vaalon ko impress jo karna hai.😉
Waiting for the next update.
Thank you for the PM.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome!😊Just read both the parts in one go... Want something like this to happen in the show too! But I know it won't!!
Update soon n do pm me..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Wooow super!!!
Kaaash cvs bhi kuch esa tv par dikhaye to maja aa jaaye!!!
Very nice
And thanks for pm
Cont soon plss and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Wow varshu its tremendous but at the same time sad as well!!!Swayam left & Sharon se ek aakhri baar mil bhi nahi paya !!!!Damn...
Now plz plz plz continue soon yaar raise interesting point pe chod diya gosh I wanna read more plz continue soon & pm me plz...

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