Swaron two shot....Akhri Alvidaupdated part 3&4 pg 9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: varsh-mayur

hey ammie..yaar we both sorted out AT wala thing na...are u ok?? kya hua ita emotional??

I dnt knw varshi os just hit me straight.on ma heart right on the emotoons bit
I m so effected tht i cnt believe it ma.self...i jst cudnt stop ma tears wen reading it

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Sadaf Khalid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Its amazing

I luved it alooot

But swayam kyun jaraha hai

Plzzz swayam mut jao na plzzz

Plzz update next part sooon and do pm me

Thanx for the pm

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

hey that was amazing 👏

I'm actually feeling a lump in my throat..

Great work yaar..

You seriously got me emotional

Continue soon. 😃

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@Death_Memories

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Res
Unres
Varshu dii🤗
this was awesome
I so loved it
It was beautiful yet heart breaking at the same time
loved it
Loved the whole concept and the way you penned it down
awesome
jaldi se next part update kardo waiting eagerly

Edited by cenation123 - 12 years ago

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Vadhana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

next update kab karogi??

Amazayn start...ek aur Baath...u'd used ek direction in one of the lines...thank U so much for that 😉

I wanna read a bigger update 😲

Beautifully khoobsurat start👏

Pm me when U update it next 😳

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Lubna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

that was soo sad!!!

i was wishing sharon would stop swayam...

but she didn't even see him!!!

poor swayam!!!

and the letter was heart-breaking...

CONTINUE SOON!!!!

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Heena

@kamlesh32

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

This was awesome but sad! Please update soon and end swayam and sharon's miseries...

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Namratha

@nami2811

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Rula diya tu ne
I loved it! But jaldi update kariyo.. Aaj hi!

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Fatima

@HSFA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Aww its was so heart wrenching.

Swayam's love for Sharon is eternal and same goes for Sharon. He just wants her to be happy as always.

I hope they reunite in the next part. Please continue soon.

I love the way you wrote it so beautiful.

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Shweta

@addicted_love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Omg ! It is such an amazing OS !! 😊
Swayam sab kuch chodh ke jaa rha hai... 😭
The letter was so Beautiful !! 😊
Continue soon yaar...
Thnx for the PM ! 😊

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