Swaron OS: 2 in 1 - Page 6

Originally posted by: aku30

awesome...😊

both OS's were great but i liked the second one more...

call me sadist or what bt i love d hurt and intense swaron...😉

and i so wanted something like dis to happen in the show but...😭

thnx for d P.M..

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Wow dis was amazing yaar. .
Both d shots were superb. .
U wrote very well. .
I liked both but i loved d second one more. .
I think palki must change her writers n pick some1 from d forum to write swaron story. . All of u guys r just amazing..
Just totally irritated with swaron fights..
N its such an amazing feeling reading an os like dis one. .
Totally enjoyed it n it made me smile..
Well done..

Originally posted by: sadafarsha

They were awsum amazing zabardast

I luved them alooot se bhi zyada

Thanku sooo much for the pm

Originally posted by: -spongy-

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unres

my god tanvish

mind blowing

superb job yaar 👏👏

really amazing

the way you wrote both the OS's was fab !!!

loved it

but pure OS main mujhe rey pain taras aa raha tha..

i just hope show main yeh ho jaye

dont want a third person in b/w swaron

mind blowing job

proud of you

please do write more

and do PM me

PS. mujhe first hona tha 😭😭

i wanted to do my victory dance 😭😭

Originally posted by: cenation123

Wow this was amazing
I loved both the OS but I really liked the second one more.Somehow it was more intense and I love Swaron + intensity.
I really liked the asthama attack part it was so emotional yet not overdone
The ending was again perfect
I really want you to continue the second one ahead

Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J

WOW!!!

loved both of them!!

great OSs!!!

awesome job!!

i loved how you thought about the two sides of the situation!!

and you wrote both sides amazingly!!

Great Work!!

Originally posted by: kamlesh32

Both os's were awesome! I just loved how u portrayed each emotion with intense dialogues!

Originally posted by: raj_tanha_fan

wow!!

double blast!!!!!

loved both the os nd the fact that a third person didnt come in between them!!

amazing!!

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: vrushaan

res
unres
it ws jst superb tanvish...i luvd ot...poor rey pe bohot taras aa rha tha muje...
nw u beter continue soon...
n plss do pm me whn u update...

Originally posted by: devlishswaron77

Wow Tanvish both the OS's were super se upar !!!!! Beautifully penned & it looked so realistic & in ur 2nd OS m glad swaron did not allow that third person to interfere & ghusofy between them ...Superb writing
I just love ur every OS SS & FF !!!!!!
And I hope u continue this plz!!!!