Swaron OS: 2 in 1

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Varada

@damonTVDrocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Both situations were awesomely described! I want the 2nd one to happen, though!😊

Are you planning on extending? Please do.. At least the 2nd one!! N do pm me..😛

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manya90

@manya90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

both were awsum 😳
hope 2nd situation happens 😉
i luved the way the spoke to rey...lol 😆

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

ur an awesome writer...i simply love all ur wrk... 😃

cuming back to ur bth d Os loved it completely...itz difficult to say which one was better bec i loved bth of dem...

loved d way u have described d whole situation...and their emotions...
amazing dear... 😊

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nancynnv

@nancynnv

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Just superb...👍🏼

N ur 2in1 idea is gr8 👏

I love the way u write ...it's something different

It's pleasure reading ur work...

Pls pm me ur next work

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: 8085548022
both os were awesome I just d3 mein bhi kuch aisa ho jaye.
I liked the second one more because it included our so called hero in it

nice os

thanks for the pm

swaron were so adorable in both the os

Thank you 😃

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: nkss
WOW!!! it was so ossum di!! 👏
pls..pls give me ur blessings..😛 puri tension dur kar di..

@ bold: 😆

Thank you so much dear 😃

Tension dur karne ke liye hi yeh likha tha 😉

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: paro1311
The best part of both the Os were that they would have fit really well in the current epis and was true to swaron story. I agree that u shld really be part of D3 writers.:)

@bold: Seriously Thank you, but itni bhi acchi writer nahi hu.. Yeh toh by chance sabko itna accha laga 😊

Thank you so much though 😃

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: nami2811
My god! Thisnwas beautiful!
I loved d 2nd one the most u knw for obvious reasons! You n I connect wid d aasthma thingy ;)

This was written so well! Thank you sooo much for d PM :)

I just feel track main asthma to thoda jyada exaggerate karke dikhaya hai, and yes maybe we do connect 😉

Thank you so much 😃

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sweet16cash
I liked the second OS much more the unabated care which swayam gave even after all the events that took place was great..😊.
The first one was great as well..[:y:]

Thank you 😃

Personally even I like the 2nd one more than the 1st one 😆