Swaron OS: 2 in 1 - Page 7

Originally posted by: damonTVDrocks

Both situations were awesomely described! I want the 2nd one to happen, though!😊

Are you planning on extending? Please do.. At least the 2nd one!! N do pm me..😛

Originally posted by: manya90

both were awsum 😳
hope 2nd situation happens 😉
i luved the way the spoke to rey...lol 😆

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

ur an awesome writer...i simply love all ur wrk... 😃

cuming back to ur bth d Os loved it completely...itz difficult to say which one was better bec i loved bth of dem...

loved d way u have described d whole situation...and their emotions...
amazing dear... 😊

Originally posted by: nancynnv

Just superb...👍🏼

N ur 2in1 idea is gr8 👏

I love the way u write ...it's something different

It's pleasure reading ur work...

Pls pm me ur next work

hey tanvish

Both are indeed amazing
But loved the second one more coz ray was stood their watching thm so in love hehehe felt satisfied ...dnt knw y

awesome yaar..
loved it alot..
n thanks for the pm :)
do write more ..

You know what the best thing is? We all SwaRon fans don't like Rey interfering between them and it's so good to see all like-minded people here! Great OS, both of em, loved it <3
Do PM me when you post a new one please, looking forward to read more man ;)

Hey!
Loved both the takes!!!!! Really enjoyed reading them...
U handled the story n the flow amazingly in both the takes...loved the drama created...they were like screenplays! :)

Both d concept
nd POV was amazing

Both d OS was Superb