Swaron OS: 2 in 1

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

I liked the second OS much more the unabated care which swayam gave even after all the events that took place was great..😊.
The first one was great as well..[:y:]

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

wish we could have seen something like in this in the serial also,so believeable.

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aku30

@aku30

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

awesome...😊

both OS's were great but i liked the second one more...

call me sadist or what bt i love d hurt and intense swaron...😉

and i so wanted something like dis to happen in the show but...😭

thnx for d P.M..

Edited by aku30 - 12 years ago

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Wow dis was amazing yaar. .
Both d shots were superb. .
U wrote very well. .
I liked both but i loved d second one more. .
I think palki must change her writers n pick some1 from d forum to write swaron story. . All of u guys r just amazing..
Just totally irritated with swaron fights..
N its such an amazing feeling reading an os like dis one. .
Totally enjoyed it n it made me smile..
Well done..

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago

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Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

They were awsum amazing zabardast

I luved them alooot se bhi zyada

Thanku sooo much for the pm

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Wow this was amazing
I loved both the OS but I really liked the second one more.Somehow it was more intense and I love Swaron + intensity.
I really liked the asthama attack part it was so emotional yet not overdone
The ending was again perfect
I really want you to continue the second one ahead

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

WOW!!!

loved both of them!!

great OSs!!!

awesome job!!

i loved how you thought about the two sides of the situation!!

and you wrote both sides amazingly!!

Great Work!!

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Heena

@kamlesh32

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Both os's were awesome! I just loved how u portrayed each emotion with intense dialogues!

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

wow!!

double blast!!!!!

loved both the os nd the fact that a third person didnt come in between them!!

amazing!!

thanks for the pm

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SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Wow Tanvish both the OS's were super se upar !!!!! Beautifully penned & it looked so realistic & in ur 2nd OS m glad swaron did not allow that third person to interfere & ghusofy between them ...Superb writing
I just love ur every OS SS & FF !!!!!!
And I hope u continue this plz!!!!