KriYaansh OS - Of Passion and Punches [HBD Vaish]

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

y did they have to die???

y oh y???

so i am leaving the fact ki u killed them... i will pretend ki maine padha nhi end... varna main pure comment mein ussi ko meantion krti rhungi...

accha so doesn't everyone love psychopaths???? i mean doing things without any rhyme and reason...

just coz of some internal adrenaline or some reason unknown to the countrymen...

haan so thats my thing...

the detective police chor khel... :D

i loved how u described kria driven by passion for rey's blood...

sweet... added an edge to it...

then the way u described the fb.. i had to think and stop for a minute.. fir it made sense..

i loved this angry/sweet rishta of theirs...

fir the storage facility mein shoot out and the make out and then take you out...

sweet... finally they cleared the other of...

y did they kill???? :'(

amazingly written.. provided the in character depth to it..

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

hailaaa...

itsss hayeee... No wordsss.fr uh..

lovedd rey as Killer dat to psyco waala...

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Sneha.V.Arsha
great concept...
nicely written..
kriya n rey killed each other😲😭..
nice work yar

Thanks so much Sneha!!

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Madhukumari
Gosh di. . . . . .
Yeh kya tha?
I mean seriously it was awsome. .
Kriyaansh ne ek-dusre ko tapka daala. .gosh.and rey sala .thrki kahika. .
Bt,it was superb. . .
I truly enjoyd reading it. .

Yeh vaish ka birthday gift tha madhu!!

Thanks for the comment!

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: cookie_arsha
Amazingly Written 👏

Loved the OS !!!!

Thank you cookie!

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Roxxy47
'Passion and Punches' , this was different...
KR killing each other , never imagined to read something like this 😳...
The concept is really somethinf Unique N interesting types 😃...
It was written greatly ...
This was a Sad one But i loved it ❤️.

i am glad I shocked you with something new!!

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: puja_arsha
Awesome blossom OS di...
Loved it...
This type of story i just love 1t d core. ..
Wild...
Mastam concept...
Fabulous...

Thanks pooja!! Kitne tym baad tune comment Kia hai!!