Swaron os:A WALK TO REMEMBER

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vrushan11swaron

@vrushan11swaron

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wowww..
awesom work...
beautifuly penned down...
thanks for d pm...

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Sunil

@Suni1986

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

awesome os
i really love d way u share emotions

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

really sweet os!!!

loved the way sharon teased swayam by calling him 'Mr. Rotlu'...😆

beautifully written...👏

thanks for the pm...

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Beautifull one shot..I loved it..SwaRon are engaged and reminising their first meet..I loved the convo of SwaRon as a kids..thats was so sweet..Emotions are beautifully penned down swayam as well as sharon..
Sharon teasing swayam part was enjoyfull..And last loved the line at the end..Its a beautifull message..Great work..

Thanx for PM

Prateek

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Gr8 stuff!!

Keep writing!!

Love the way shar teases swayam!

Ty for the PM.

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Rotlu Swayam 😆
Haven't read any write up where Swayam is such a cry baby,this was a hoot😆😛
Sharon's teasing was fun but the best part was the end when rotlu boy gets some of his own back.Smirking Swayam and blushing Sharon are vintage and that was a great touch in the end.
Too bad you aren't continuing this,the future Sharon painted would have been fun to read about.
Swayam crying along with their kids while Sharon consoles all of them alone🤣