With you - SwaRon OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: MoNayaHolicPrag

if i have to comment

u know main gaana zarur gaungi😳

so here it goes

mashallah mashallah

likhti tu mashallah

swaron ke scene bhi likhti tu mashallah😆

okay coming back

I loooved it😃

is padhe ke mujhe cvs ko bolna

lo kuch sikho isse😃

And meri SS you atlast have shown your besharmi hai😉

Chance pe Dance

Wah wah😆

You know amazing yaar👏

the way you showed sharon wenting out her feeling

lover boy supporting her

and then the last part

i woudnt like to make comments on the last part

yeah it was my favorite though😳⭐️

I am so happy to read ur ff

All the torture i was going through coz of D3 just vanished😛

Mindblowing

Simply fabulous👏

Prags 🤣
Tu yahaan bhi shuru ho gayi 😆
This song is masth bdw 😆
I'm happy ki tujhe pasand aaya meri SS. Aur haan maine koshish ki apni besharmi waali string ko na touch karoon lekin kya karein aadat se majboor 😆
I wish ki aisa kuch scene mil jaaye D3 mein aur hume iss torture se chutkara mil jaaye..

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan

Namu...first of all thank you for writing again and writing the swaron after confession part...

Now coming to update it was so beautiful emotional and heart touching...


Sharon want to clear out all the past regrets and want their relation to b without any spot of past in it was so beautifullay pointed out...

I also loved how swayam didn't want to go on in the past as he somewhere knows that talking past can make Sharon upset...

The fast kiss to stop Sharon was cute bt the first kiss was divine...it reflected all their emotions love for each other ...


In and out it was indeed a perfect and khubsurat os...

Keep writing and aage se mijhe pm send karna

Thank you Goga! 😊
I'm glad u liked it :)
I always wanted SwaRon to have a heart to heart talk abt their journey of being together n I hope n wisb to c such things not inly in my OSbut also on screen.. 😳

res

maariyo mat... ab padhke pakka comment karungi...

Originally posted by: ---Priya---

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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#cc33cc">I so loved that part where they both were even counting mili seconds... They couldnt stay away from each other.. This is how i want swaron to behave.. this is how a couple should be..</font>

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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#cc33cc">Sharon Rai Prakash waiting for swayam and wanting to go on a bicycle ride was aww... Kash we get all this on screen too!!! I love how swayam wanted to hug 😉 Ahem... swayam's way of calming down siren sharon☺️</font>

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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#cc33cc">A romantic walk is all day a beauty to read and when its on swaron, the beauty just gets added. I liked the way how sharon and swayam talked abt their past and cleared out things!</font>

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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#cc33cc">The consoling hug and swayam's lover boy line, everything was perfect!!!</font>

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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#cc33cc">I loved the OS nami 🤗 🤗</font>

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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#cc33cc">This OS was a saviour today guru ji 🤗 after watching a frustrating epi, this gave an awesome feeling while reading. i had that huge smile on my face from the start😃</font>

Shishya 🤗
I'm so happy u liked it :)
Ur idea of replacing Palki wid me is an all time hit provided I gt my gurudakshina 😉
And u are improving balike.. The besharmi string in u has also been showing up off late 😆
I'm glad this turned ur mood ON
I 😆

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh

res

maariyo mat... ab padhke pakka comment karungi...

Ab main tujhe maaroon?! 😡
Nahi shraap deti hoon.. Tera Vetaal humesha tera pecha karte rahe.. Swaha!

Originally posted by: SwaronVrushaan

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">Awesome OS nami\⭐️</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">i really loved it to the core🤗</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">y cant cvs show dis kind of scene in the show❤️</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">superb yar it is⭐️⭐️</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">sharon saying abt how she felt in the past ...i always wished dat dis kind of convo will hapeen bt it will never happen each other janda nad walking...omg it is just fantastic⭐️</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">and they holding</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">thank u for dis OS nami it is much needed</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">i want an OS from u daily...😛</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">cvs take some ideas from the writers here😡</font>

Thank you Chandu 😊
Daily OS? I'll have to quit my job🤣
Glad u liked my writing n had a god time reading :)

i will get back to comment once finished reading...

perfect and fabulous ... loved everything in it...
the chapter was awesome and loved it...

Originally posted by: cenation123

this was soo good👏👏👏👏
swayam to ha hi majnu but sharon bhi laila ho gayi😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
counting seconds and miliseconds😆
loved how u showed the desperation to meet each other...
I was excited for cycle ride but aapne to tyre hi puncture kar diya😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
but the walk was even more beautiful.I liked how sharon confessed to her attraction to him from the beginning the whole shivam insident and the promise😃
lastly the kiss was cherry on the cake...😉
hope to see something like this in D3

Thank you for liking it :)