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Helloo_Vrushaan

@Helloo_Vrushaan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Awesome OS nami\⭐️

i really loved it to the core🤗

y cant cvs show dis kind of scene in the show❤️

superb yar it is⭐️⭐️

sharon saying abt how she felt in the past ...i always wished dat dis kind of convo will hapeen bt it will never happen each other janda nad walking...omg it is just fantastic⭐️

and they holding

thank u for dis OS nami it is much needed

i want an OS from u daily...😛

cvs take some ideas from the writers here😡

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Namratha

@nami2811

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sweetdivya
Awesome nami... 😃 finally u completed it.. 😃
it was cute and romantic at same time... 😳
loved d majnu boy and our newly in love Diva Sharon... 😳
and der desperation to be with each other... 😳

Thank you honeybee 😳
I haven't watched D3 for 2 days n this is the outcome 😆

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Namratha

@nami2811

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: swaron9113
mumma u didn't res a post fr me nor u tell me abt ths os.

U r too bad. 😭 😭

Oye.. Before I could PM anyone sab ne posts reserve kar liye 😆

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: swaron9113
mumma u didn't res a post fr me nor u tell me abt ths os.

U r too bad. 😭 😭

hey swthrt..u can pm me ur comment ..i will post it before my comment😳

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

this was soo good👏👏👏👏
swayam to ha hi majnu but sharon bhi laila ho gayi😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
counting seconds and miliseconds😆
loved how u showed the desperation to meet each other...
I was excited for cycle ride but aapne to tyre hi puncture kar diya😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
but the walk was even more beautiful.I liked how sharon confessed to her attraction to him from the beginning the whole shivam insident and the promise😃
lastly the kiss was cherry on the cake...😉
hope to see something like this in D3

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Totally loved it. Though i read it in hurry, sorry.

I loved the entire concept, it was a good post confession scene for me! Gosh, why can't CV show such scenes in D3!? The concept was beautiful and simple, and it was simple that was the beauty in it. :)

The sweet yet Siren Sharon was aww and the way she shouted on Swayam when the cycle's tire was punctured was the best part for me, yes including that small sweet peck on lips. Swayam is a darling, a real amazing boyfriend in this OS! No other words then saying how much i loved this OS!

I liked the ending, how you wrote it with a small kiss an hug. Lovely OS!

PS: Do write more! You write amazing.

-Marium

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sneha singh

@swaron9113

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: nami2811
A special thanks to the AT gang for encouraging me to write this.. 🤗

hmm sache. 🤗 to ek our os likhiye just lyk ths on yesterdays precap.
I promise hm incourge krange.
Plz mumma one more. 😒

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: swaron9113
hmm sache. 🤗 to ek our os likhiye just lyk ths on yesterdays precap.
I promise hm incourge krange.
Plz mumma one more. 😒

Sneha you are such a cheez! :P

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sneha singh

@swaron9113

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: -Marium-

Sneha you are such a cheez! :P

why??

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bhavika

@BhaviJas

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: swaron9113
hmm sache. 🤗 to ek our os likhiye just lyk ths on yesterdays precap.
I promise hm incourge krange.
Plz mumma one more. 😒

yup momy plsss 1 more...😳