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Posted: 12 years ago
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Today was suppposed to be the happiest day of her life...today was sumthing which she eagerly waited for...today she was going to introduce rey to tauji as hr bf...she was dancing in happiness bt who knew dat d d much awaited day 4 hr had sumthing which she nvr thought of...A BRK UP..!!

she was in search of rey to tell him abt this...on the other side rey who was unaware of all this had sumthin else in mind..he was planing a brk up for taani's betterment...here taani's search finaaly ends after finding rey in the reahersal hall..she was abt to walk inside bt sumthing stopped hr...she heard rey talking to sharon ...

R-Sharon , of late Taani mujhe bahot irritate karne lagi hai...mujhe bhi cahiye ki meri gf carrier driven ho , ambitious ho...bt Taani , kya kya sochti hai woh shaadi barat n all hr stupid dreams...

befor she could hear anything else she ran away...unable to believe hr own ears..wat hr ears jst heard...she was unconsolable...she could nt believe that it was rey who said that all...after crying for hours at night she calls rey to cum to hr room through d window n den d brk up scene...after rey walks away...taani takes hr car n drives to a place...a place which probably luked like a rehersal hall...no one knew abt this place..nt evn swayam..n wen she reaches...

she plays a song

Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata

Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila

Is Pyaar Mein Hon Kaise Kaise Imntihaan

Ye Pyaar Likhe Kaisi Kaisi Dastaan

Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar

(she dances greacefully...she was doing contemporary...hr prfct body moves...hr pointed toes...the pain in hr eyes...and d tear droplets falling off hr chocolate brown eyes...rey was stunned to see taani dancing like this'jst like profesionals'..)

( Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar )' (2)

Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata

Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila

Kaisa Hai Safar Wafa Ki Manjil Ka

Na Hai Koi Hal Dilon Ki Mushkil Ka

Dhadkan Dhadkan Bikhri Ranjishein

Saansein Saansein Tooti Bandishein

Kahi To Har Lamha Honton Pe Fariyaad Hai

Kisi Ki Duniya Chaahat Mein Barbaad Hai

( Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar )' (2)

Koi Na Sune Sisakati Aanhon Ko

Koi Na Dhare Tadapati Baahon Ko

Aadhi Aadhi Puri Khwaishein

Tooti Footi Sab Farmaaishein

(whle dancing rey's words kept on going in hr mind...i wish ki meri gf bhi carier driven ho abitious ho n all )

Kahin Shak Hain Kahin Nafrat Ki Deewaar Hai

Kahin Jeet Mein Bhi Shamil Palpal Haar Hain

Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar

Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar

Ho O O Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata

Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila

Ho O O O Ho O O O

Na Poocho Dard Bandon Se

Hansi Kaisi Khushi Kaisi

Musibat Sar Pe Rehati Hain

Kabhi Kaisi Kabhi Kaisi

Ho O O O' Rabba, Rabba Ho O O Ho

Rabba Ho O O, Ho O Ho Rabba

after d dance taani was talking to hrslf

T- kabhi nhi socha tha ki aap aise honge...aapne kabhi janne ki koshish nhi ki ki kyu maine aisa kahan ki mujhe carrier n all me koi interest nhi hai...woh isliye kyu ki...me bhi aap sab ki tarah hi ek dancer thi n dance me hi apna carrier banana chahati thi bt tauji ko dance se sakth nafrat hai...main nhi cahati thi tauji mujhse nafrat karen...main kabhi unke bina apni lyf soch bhi nhi sakti thi...mere paas koi aur option nhi tha...so mujhe dance chodna pada n jb dance chod diya toh kuch aur karne ka dil hi nhi karta tha...so maine abhi tak socha nhi tha ki kya karungi...n me nhi chahati thi ki sab ko pata chale ki me dancer hun si islye maine aapse jhut kahan ki mujhe carrier n all me interest hi nhi hai...( by this she was weeping bitterly...) bt rey aap...saying so she starts walkng towards the entrance n she is shocked to see rey there

.(yes..rey had followed hr without hr notice...n he was shocked seing taani dancin like a proffesional n after listening to wat taani said he felt guilty..his heart broke into thousand pieces...he was cursing himself for all that he said n finally he spoke...)

R- T...A...A..N...I.

T- rey mujhe aap se koi baat nhi karni

R- bt mujhe karni hai...

T- aap mere koi nhi hote ki me aapki baat manu

R- taani listen i m srry ...i m ( bt taani dosent let him complete)

T- kitna aasan hota hai na dil tod ke srry bolna...

R- NHI HOTA !!! (he den holds hr hand n bangs hr on the wall... )

R- jaana chahati ho ki maine woh sab kyu kahan tha..

(taani was nt in sense to react..so rey continues...)

R- maine yeh isliye kiya tha kyuki me tumhe succesful banana chahata tha...i wanted ki tum strong bano n apne potential ko use karo...N trust me Taani tumse jyada dard mujhe hua tha jab maine woh sab kaha bt tumhare liye me kuch bhi kar sakta hun taani...yeh sab kuch maine sirf aur sirf tumhare liye kiya taani bt sach toh yeh hai ki I LUV U TAANI'

taani was crying listening to all this...d love rey had for hr melted hr ...he was ready to live without hr jst for hr betterment...thinking all this she hugged rey tightly...I LUV U TOO rey...(n she thinks ...i promise ki main apna carrier banaungi n apne pairo(legs ) pe khadi ho kar dikhaungi...dance me na sahi bt zarur kar ke dikhaungi...)

__THE END__

so guys how was it...agar bakwaas laga toh srry as this is my first one n maine isse bohot jaldi jaldi likha tha...😳

PLSS DO CMMENT UR THOUGHTS N FEEL FREE TO POINT OUT MY MISTAKES 😳😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Nice OS !! Taani as a Dancer but she hid her identity and in the end TaaRey patch-up !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

Wow Nice OS !! Taani as a Dancer but she hid her identity and in the end TaaRey patch-up !!

thnks dear 😊😊

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wow lovely os aishšŸ‘...mein ne kabhi yeh show nhi dekha but i like your writing alot.šŸ‘šŸ¼...catchy dance and song😳...loved it to the core amazing yaaršŸ¤— plz write an os on anya also...😳
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superb storyšŸ‘šŸ¼ very well written...😳
Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os...😊
well written..
loved i...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -meru-

wow lovely os aishšŸ‘...mein ne kabhi yeh show nhi dekha but i like your writing alot.šŸ‘šŸ¼...catchy dance and song😳...loved it to the core amazing yaaršŸ¤— plz write an os on anya also...😳

thnks meru 4 d luvly comment šŸ¤—

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lavi_taarey

superb storyšŸ‘šŸ¼ very well written...😳

thnks dear 😊

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Originally posted by: shanaya-taarey

nice os...😊

well written..
loved i...

thnks somu..😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os...
loved it...
thnk u 4 d pm...😊😊

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