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kshitija

@--Kshitz--

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Posted: 12 years ago

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unres
wow the emotions...i could feel it...the pain of losing someone...the pain when u loose someone...the pain that u cannot get back to the person...
The way u expressed the emotions...making a small world and seeing that crashing...its really difficult...and u wrote it so simply and with feels
Just loved it...
Too good

Edited by KS_SWARON - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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unres

wow

amazing

the way the feelings were described

wow!!!!

really well written OS 👏👏👏

amazing

great work..

thanks to swathi_swaron for the pm

do write more

and do pm me

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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+ 16

Posted: 12 years ago

ek aur... kya baat kya baat kya baat...

raat ko karungi unres...

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veronica

@SwaRon_rocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

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unres

superb os bhai..😃

loved ur way of writing..all the emotions were nicely penned👏

it felt like u r saying this to vrushi..itne ache se feelings describe ki thi😳

sry for the small comment..will make up for it in other os's

-angel

Ps thanks swathi di for pm

Edited by SwaRon_rocks - 12 years ago

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cscs

@cscs

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

amit..its awesome..u described emotions so beautifully..😊 i guess teri inspiration bahut strong h😆..keep it up..

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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

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unres

🤗👏

kya likha hai

aap kamal ke writer ho!!!

lagta hai aapne ye apne aap ko imagine karke likha hai

wonderful!!!

Edited by arsha_vrushan - 12 years ago

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payal

@.vruShan_rocks.

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Posted: 12 years ago

👏👏vrushika ke deewane kya mast os likha hai!! next time mujhe pm karna varna😡

btw nice os

aapko saachi me swaaron beer chad gai hai 😆

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesomeee
i could feel the desperation that u penned the desperation to be close to someone u love the most yet u cant be
it was just mind blowing
so emotional