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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: preitygal99
Fabulous piece...
Only if CVs knew to handle the relationships we could have got such scenes in the Show too...

This was just amazing n with perfect SwaRon characteristics

Thank you so much! 😳
It has been ages since we have got a proper Swaron heart-to-heart talk! How I wish to get such Swaron-ilicious scenes...

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: neeliyer
Awesome piece of work .. the way you have shown sharon helping swayam sorting out things was really very beautiful .. i wonder, why we don't have such meaningful scenes in the show instead of the stupid melodrama which is been going on n on ..

Superb writing .. pls do pm me when u write ..

Thank you so much! 😳

I was afraid if anyone would like it...:P
I don't know why they had to include SwaRon in the so-called TaaRey break-up! All we get is melodrama and more melodrama...🥱

Have sent you a buddy request! 😳

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

beautiful and flawless... just wow..

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sanstina
Amazing 😊

Thank you so much...😳

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh
beautiful and flawless... just wow..

Thank you so much...😳

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

This was really an amazing piece of work. I rarely read os or ss or ff now but I am glad I read this one. This was simply brilliantly written and the best bit totally in sync with their character as well as the track on the show. The entire conversation was beautifully penned with some really deep life lessons. It was really a treat to read this. And I so wish we get a scene like the one you described where Swayam and Sharon are just lying on the beach trying to make stuffs with stars. It would be really enchanting.

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

beautifully written os

fab work

plz pm me wen u write more stuffs like this

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

This was beautifully written OS. Nd it had the SwaRonish feel all over it. The tok that SwaRon had was extremely well written. It ws an absolute hr8-hr8 tok. Loved it. Loved the way how Swayam let Sharon know how is he feeling in the situation nd how amazingly Sharon brought him out of his problem. Loved how she made him understand he cant balme himself for others. The stars moment was rly gr8. And the best part was how Swayam asked her bout them. Where dey stand. Nd den Sharon's realisation. Loved how she let down her insecurities and accepted the love.. Brilliant write up. A very beautiful story... Do come with more...

Edited by tannu_swayam - 12 years ago