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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: marauder
This was really an amazing piece of work. I rarely read os or ss or ff now but I am glad I read this one. This was simply brilliantly written and the best bit totally in sync with their character as well as the track on the show. The entire conversation was beautifully penned with some really deep life lessons. It was really a treat to read this. And I so wish we get a scene like the one you described where Swayam and Sharon are just lying on the beach trying to make stuffs with stars. It would be really enchanting.

Thank you so much...:)

I am gladder that you read it and in return gave a long review. Makes me more than happy! I love the simplicity that Swaron share...Nothing showy or OTT but everything which is required to make a strong base for relationships. Being with each other is enough for them...:)

Thank you so much once again...A beach scene would be a treat to watch...;)

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi
beautifully written os
fab work

plz pm me wen u write more stuffs like this

Thank you so much...:)

Have sent you a buddy request...Will PM you when I write again...:)

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Superb
Loved it

Thank you so much...:)

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: shreyasi28
Amazing, loved it :)

Thank you so much...:)

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
loved it... os...

Thank you so much...:)

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: spongy
amazing work
keep it up
loved the os

Thank you so much...:)

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LittleBitOfAlexis

@LilBitOfAlexis

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

AmaIng piece of work !!!👏
Really like the way you depicted swaron 😊
Simply beautiful ...loved it <3

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: maliha_khan
Awesome work👍🏼

Thank you so much...😳

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam
This was beautifully written OS. Nd it had the SwaRonish feel all over it. The tok that SwaRon had was extremely well written. It ws an absolute hr8-hr8 tok. Loved it. Loved the way how Swayam let Sharon know how is he feeling in the situation nd how amazingly Sharon brought him out of his problem. Loved how she made him understand he cant balme himself for others. The stars moment was rly gr8. And the best part was how Swayam asked her bout them. Where dey stand. Nd den Sharon's realisation. Loved how she let down her insecurities and accepted the love.. Brilliant write up. A very beautiful story... Do come with more...

Thank you so much...:)

I absolutely love the long review! I was just trying to pen down something when this story came to me all of a sudden. Nothing preplanned but the moment it came to my mind, I knew the couple had to be SwaRon! I just knew it! Innocent and pure...:)

Swaron heart-to-heart talk is something we don't get to see much in the original story...Am glad you liked it! Thank you once again for the sweet comment and the long review...:)