Incomplete...Without You: A SwaRon OS.

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

hi ria.. awesome amazing os.. loved each n single word in it.. beautifully u emoted swayam's feelings of missing sharon.. loved d way u narrated everything.. ur a awesome writer.. hats of to this os.. it was beautiful.. awesome.. title s so apt incomplete wit out u... beautiful...

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flirteyed

@flirteyed

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

THIS WAS AMAZING! Thanx for d pm!

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

amazing os ria

small small increase d intensity of dis os
end was awesome

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@-AD-

Trailblazer

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Thanks Ri for the PM...

Amazing ... Beautifully portrayed...Luved it..

Well done 👏 and I am waiting for the next...

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Soha

@-Soha-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

*Speechless*

I just don't have words to describe the beauty how it was written.

It was filled with emotions which were perfectly described..

It was just awesome fitting on the couple 'forever'...SWARON!

Thanks 4 the pm.

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Soha...!

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

amazing os 👏

Edited by vrushanharshi - 12 years ago

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anandita

@blooming_angel

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Wow di...its so touching truely amazing...
It made me cry...
Just loved it...

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

wow ,i mean it it was amazingly penned ,some how it made me remember my tanhawala swaron again i dont noe but i was imagining them all the way throught the os ,thanks for dat blissfull experience .

Edited by Sanskruti_tanha - 12 years ago

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sanjana_D3

@sanjana_D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

This is so beautiful.

Loved the addition of such an amazing song that contributes and fits into the story perfectly. :)

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934800

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Beautiful piece of writing princess...you are well aware how much I love this song but honestly such deeply thinking behind the song I cudnt imagine. .. the way you described feelings of separation was beautifully painfull it actually felt to me n to top it up I was listening to the song while reading so Ihhad every reason to hve tears in eyes.

p.s. nt praising u much coz I knw wht u wud say thn