Incomplete...Without You: A SwaRon OS.

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wow..that was amazing you...seriously touched my heart with that ...im pretty much speechless you did sooo good!!thanks for the pm!!

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Ria Beautiful OS...Fantastically penned down...luved it...specially the way you used megha dii's and deepu dii's story titles was brilliant...luved the OS to the core ❤️ ❤️

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

amazing song selection.. 👏👏

brilliant os.. 😊😊

this os wasnt like the normal os's

it had a feeling of love instead of a story line.. 😳😳 😃😃

it was touching 😳😳

it was really penned down beautifully... 👏👏👏

thnk u for the pm..

do write more n keep pm-ing me... 😃😃😃

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arshi_snia

@arshi_snia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

nice update.really very touching story.thanx for the pm

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

hey congratulations for new OS...actually I am not following anything relating to d3 but you have been nice friend so specially here for you...

very nice effort...it was a pleasant read for me...enjoyed thoroughly reading this one...I liked everything about this OS specially the end where innovatively you included names of works of deeps and megha...

all the best for your future works...thank you for pm...

Pratik

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Tooba

@maliha_khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Loved it... Truly a swayam's heart voice... N very well written superb...Keep it upup👏👍🏼

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Ria, beautiful OS. I loved the way you expressed the devoid, flawlessly. This was simply wonderful, and ridiculously amazing. :D)

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Woah!Another beautiful writeup from u Ria.👏👏. Simply splendid.. SwaRon are apart nd u carved out the pain in the situation amzingly.. I luvd how it ws from Swayam's narration.. His emotions nd agony ws beautifully penned.. There ws a very lyrical flow to the OS wch mkes it an xtrmly pleasant read.. U included Westlyf's I wanna grow old wit u wch ws also very apt fr the situation..😳. A brilliantly written write up bud..👏 Great job...👍🏼