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Posted: 12 years ago
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She was sorry for god knows how mant times.Was he so stubborn or she was possesive about him.It was Archie's and Alisha's wedding tonight she was just praying dat he will come to pick her up on time.It was more dan 2 hrs she was waiting for him but she thought he will not come to pick her.Tears trickling down from her big eyes wid her kajal getting spoilt.She gets up and den d bell rings dat time she quickly picks up a tissue and cleans her face which had tears.She ran towards the door and opens it and found him standing dere [ how handsme and hot can he look she was gawking at him, he was wearing formals☺️ and he again made me fall awl over him again].He wid a serious look on his face asked chale?[not even noticing how elegant shakti was looking,she was wearing d same green saree dat Kareena Kapoor Khan wears in d song teri meri from the movie Bodyguard].He said we r getting late now so shall we??? she said hmm. Both of dem went to d venue where d wedding was .In d car it was full silence she was staring here and dere so dat amar kuch toh kahega but no he said nothing till now.They reached the wedding place and congratulated arlisha for deir wedding den dey talke and chatted wid others like sam,vinti,sneha,shan,maccy and others and after marriage went to the car arking area where the car was standing, suddenly shakti asked i hope kisiki ko hamare problem ke bare mein nahi pta chala dat we r not talking from last 2 months.Amar was in his angry young man mood after listening awl dat comes near her and pins her to the passenger seat door and tells her a simple NO . There eyes were getting red due to the proximity and anger in dem.Amar says lets go its late now. She says ok.Dey reached home and amar went to his room and shakti goes in d kitchen to drink some water [den both of dem remembering d cute moments dey spent wid each other before d MU dey had,actually arsha went to a club for new year's party and amar ki fan girls were so involved in him dat shakti felt she is being ignored and maan hi maan she was possesive and insecure abt him] and amar was really missing her now he had tears in his eyes his eyes were red swollen coz he was missing his baatcutter now he said i am gonna make u feel d same my baatcutter today d way we were 2 monthe before so wat shall i do ... thinking IDEA... he den decorated d room wid red and white candles awl over[any1 who has watched VIVAH any1 plzzz imagine d last scene room for sometime😉]and d balcony was awl open and wind was blowing he den went to shakti's room as he knew she must have not slept till now so he knocked her door and she opened d door and asked what do u want??? He said i actually a-c-t-ua--lly i wanted to h-av-e a da--nc-e wid u ri8 now.She was having butterflies in her stomach now.She said Yes but wich song he said our song KHUDHA JAANE😳. Den dey started dancing slowly his hand on her bare stomach and her hands across his broad shoulders trapping him in her small and thin arms. She wanted d most of him now she was having tears formed in her eyes and he recognised it and said i want u back shaku bai foreva and bent down on his knees and said i am sorry for dat mistake i did and she also felt guilty somewhere deep down her heart and also came on her knees jus d way amar was and said i am sorry too amar isme mere bhi utni hi galti thi jitne aapki thi so i am sorry to holding her ears and saying sorry and amar hugged her very tightly now.I love u shakti hmmm she said. WAT HMMM say i love u too amar okay baba i love u tooo so can we go to d room now i am tired now shaks she said okiesss chalo and den he picked her up in his arms and took her to d room. She was shocked to see the room she was in heaven after seeing the arrangements made by her hubby😆.She was proud of him actually dat how can he make her fall awl over him again and again.Sometimes she thinks how can he read her from inside dat wat she wants from her.He knew she wanted him Tonight more den anything else apart.He asked shall we she was getting goosebumps dat wats in store for the night now.He slowly stared kissing her shoulders and side by side sliding down her pallu of d saree and throwed it on d floor.She was blushing to d core and den ran towards one corner of the room and was smiling hard abt how she felt now.He was staaring her wid his piercing eyes.He takes small steps and goes and reaches her back now her face was towards d wall and he was behind her keeping his hands on the wall and trapping her from escaping.He slides his hand b/w the gaps of her fingers and and pressing her more on the wall.Kunwar plzzz dont stop now plzzz but he was not stopping at any cost.He den started unhooking the blouse and smashing it on d ground den she again ran and lied on d corner of d bed and he goes and lies beside her den she turns and hugs him and both of dem were feeling d warmth of deir hawt bodies.Her curves were totally on him now and his shirt was just to be removed now.She started unbottoning his shirt now and dey both rolled on d bed.Amar was kissing bitting wetting her curves and sucking d tips of her curves and she was moaning his name and he reached her lips and started sucking her soft lips inside his mouth and gettin lost in d sweet smell of d strawberry tot flavour lipstick which was her fav lipstick.Both of dem were tired now.He den laid beside her and said hamari liife kitni change ho gayi na from DID,se D3 tak den we as ARSHA hamare fans wanted ki we both should hook up phir uske baad u leaving d3 going to new york den arsha and KR fans ka gussa on palki and our new IV rem for ur new calendar shoot our were so happy wid dose chota sa IV aur uske baad me and charlie in NB5 and my breakup wid dat bitch den u coming back to d3 our confession and den marriage after 6 months of confession it was a awsum experience for me Thank u for everything u gave me shakti pta nahi widout u main kha karta coz wen u decided to go to NY mein thora bauklha gaya tha she giggled a little den aur uske baad u know changes came after marriage responsibilities came up for us.I just want to thank u for being in life and den he kissed d back of her hand have a good night my dearly wifey itss late naaa he den swittched off d lamp which was on and gathered her in his arms and slept the night away.
HOPE u guyzzz like my 1st ever written update on IF its d 1st time i am writing something on IF do tell me howz it LIKE COMMENT CRITICIZE AND SUGGEST some ideas to tell me where can i improve 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS Palak...👏👏

loved it😃

Pm to ppl in ur buddylist since many of us don't go thru d forum topics..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum OS dear👏👏
loved it 2 d core...👍🏼
aaj bohot dino baad Arsha par kuch padhene mila..

dat 2 bcz of u...
Thnk u so much dear...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice OS Palak... I actually just love reading things on Arsha especially...so i really liked it... And if talking abt critisim/flaws...whatever... I think that is somthing whch only the other writers can explain u better... Since it ws ur very first time...so sab maaf... 😉 ... I really liked it... Nice OS dear... Well done... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazin one
no wonder its ur 1st atempt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey palak suprb os,,,👏
i m loving it,,❤️

ps.atlst pm toh kar deti
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gr8 os..
No one can say dat it ws ur first attempt..
Awesome..
Do write more n pm me..

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