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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

superb Os

par problem kya thi ye toh bataooo

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome os Neeti

I liked Reyam friendship very much. & Swaron's daughter Anusha prefer her uncle rey to read bedtime stories for her over her father but poor rey hates fairy tale😆

Throughout reading i was keep thinking where is Sharon. & when Swayam went to a place & you mentioned graveyard i screamed loud enough maar dala maar dala Sharon ko😆 but thank U very much for not killing Sharon😳

So fight was the problem between Swaron & loved the way Swayam manofy Sharon calling himself jerk idiot. All iz well in the End.

Keep writing more

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Neetz the maharani of OS back with one. thank you darling, and madam kaha the aap??? comments not over will be back

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

its lovely...🤗

swayam is like an average guy...

he love his gal... but not passionately...

rather too bad at expressing it...😳

awww... sharon was sho cute as a kiddo..😃

believes in fairytales... wanting her life to be same as that...

innocently in love with her bestie 😛

her daughter is her carbon copy indeed 😆

well... u scared us very well..

i only thought she's no more 😭

but there he is at her house apologising 😲

they just had a seriousss fight 🤪

god bless these kids..🤣

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

such a sweet OS...loved it Neethi...swayam trying to convince sharon LOL...all their past moments got in between were very touching...this one is different from wat i have read on SS...enjoyed it..keep writing many more on SS.

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Ria

@Ria_SwaRon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Super cute OS...

It was unpredictable... thodu sa.. :P ;P :)

I thought Sharon was dead...😆 😆

Anyways, keep writing...!!

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Even i thought that sharon is dead!
Gosh neeti that was closee :-D :-D
But it was Awesomee!!
Cute daughter they have!
And rey..lol being a sweet uncle!
It was really nycc!

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Aisha

@-.Spark.-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

It was an awesome OS. i am not a person who really likes to read the sad ones. as i generally end up with tears in my eyes. and exams are already giving me enough at the moment. dont want more. but anyways coming to the OS, it was a lovely one. when i reached halfway i thought of it to be sad OS and thought of not reading it anymore :P. but i thought its better i complete it, so i kept on reading it. when i came across the word 'graveyard', i was pretty sure that sharon is dead but here with a bang we see swayam in sharons bedroom saying sorry to her. it was quite a hilarious moment for me atleast. well the proposal was quite, i can call it "unique". and the ending was quite funny wen their baby was scared of reys snores. loved that part. in all it was an awesome OS.

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704537

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Awesome work dear...thnx for d PM

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--Rumeli--

@--Rumeli--

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

its pretty long to get an OS from you Neeti..it was blissful one..the way swaRon's cranky daughter had her own ways to listen bedtime stories from rey was real cute..then came the recollection part of swayam..small sharon wanted to be kissed as she is the princess that was sooo sweet thing i ever read..when you wrote abt the graveyard I was scared of another sad OS but the end was lovely the line where swayam says he is a physcho was truely nice..keep writing more..loved the OS..thankx fr the PM