First - usually I'm the one who is habituated in placing apologetic notes in my reviews of ur OS's . . .but , for the first time - it's a "yo-yo" day today where instead of being late I'm gonna barge in "nagging-zone" 😎 because - For the first time- u skipped me from informing about this OS . . . .( oh please - I'm not talking about the formal PM assignment here ) 😉
Well , I'm not rattling about the characterization too protracted way . . Just wanna say - Swayam of this fiction is pole apart from the one we used to envisage on general basis . . . So capricious yet so circumspect . . . And Sharon is here under more crafty light . . . More conspicuous in peeling off . . . And somehow Anusha - is a beautified blend of these two whom u just cant eschew even if u attempt . . . But my fav character of this OS is - the Singhania Uncle ( enchanted ? 😆 ) . . . Yap - he is indeed . . .
"What can I do? I have that charm that attracts ladies." Rey pulled up his collar and flash his bright smile.
I just cant get over this line . . .😆 . . . Neeti Y. - script writing is ur zone , girl . . . I'm just flabbergasted by the creamy flow of ur dialogues here of this piece . . . .👏
Now gonna elaborate my gratification regarding this OS- Neeti , I'm one of ur uncanny di (dreading to use the word close ) , right ? So- sometimes do cater some rules of flawless writing , please 😳 Ok - on serious tone - this OS was a readers "roller Coaster ride" and writers "ground of gathering spark" . . . I mean - I was thoroughly on impromptu waltzing while reading it . . . soo Neat use of language and so Innovative vision of concept . . . . Really - The word "Superb" cant do authentic justice . . . . . thumbs up . . .👍🏼
"He's sleeping and I'm scared daddy. There are scary noises from his room."
"That must be him snoring." Swayam said. Sharon snickered.
"Daddy come home please. Where are you?"
"I was picking Mommy up, baby." Swayam said, smiling at Sharon. "She's coming home."
Nothing steadfast to say about the termination trail . . .because - dont own the spontaneous spree to draw it under adjective-roof . . . NY- u r born to shine - keep shining the universe . . . . .🤗
Turin ( Shantanu Soul )
Udne Ki Aasha
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