swaron os: broken dreams and new realities

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Hi guys i am angelitha and i love swaron and taarey to the core and since i already did a taarey ss i wanted to write one os on swaron. this is purely a swaron os. Hope you guys enjoy it.

A weird kind of eerie feeling entered her. one that she never experienced before. a kind of numbness protruded her face and distorted her beautiful features. She felt like she forgot how to smile or she never knew how to in the first place. she walked out of her room filled with painful memories to her living room filled with people but yet she was alone. No one to call her name anymore... atleast not like how he used to. there was alot of wailing going on in the living room.she glanced around the room with her empty eyes. people dressed in white were sobbing. out of the crowd she saw people who were familiar yet complete strangers. "did it really matter anymore " she thought to herself. involuntarily she found herself scanning the room hoping to find him in the white clad crowd. He was not there... it was ridiculous that she expected him to be there anyway and yet it was perfectly reasonable. she never thought that she sharon raiprakash will become so dependent on someone. yet she did want to depend on him. soon she caught a pair of worried eyes staring at her.

The eyes were filled with tears and pain. after a while she recognized it as taani's.after the incident she found herself taking time to recognize her surroundings. she scanned the room one more tine with all the energy she could muster and she found that taani was not the only one who was staring at her. everyone who she once held dear were far away from her. she walked back to the room so that she could be alone but she knew it did not matter anyway. she walked around the room and took in the sweet smell of his perfume.her lips bent slightly to form a kind of smile." i can still smell you and they say you are gone... i will not believe it... i cant believe it... my loverboy will never leave me"

saying so she left the room and started doing the dishes. she could hear the wailing from the living room. she chose to block it out. she put her earphones in her ear and started listening to her songs. Pehla nasha started playing . she unknowingly smiled to herself thinking of all the times she spent with him. she started humming to herself while doing the dishes once she was done she turned around to her horrified friends. " what is wrong guys?". simmi was the first to talk in a strangled tone" what's wrong with us? what's wrong with you sharon?".sharon looked at her with a genuinely confused expression." what are you talking about babes?" taani got angry." bhabhi please snap out of it!" sharon was taken back. " what are you talking about taani?" nimmi was the next to speak." you know exactly what we are talking about. you have not cried since we got the news that he is gone".sharon said something that shocked everyone." that is because he is not gone." Rey got extremely worried , he took sharon by the shoulder and shook her hard." sharon swayam is gone !!! he died in an accident yesterday. We just completed his final rites. please accept it and cry... he is gone and he isnt coming back!"rey said in a painful and strangled voice. sharon just looked at him with an indifferent expression. she walked off. but stopped when taani said something." please bhaabhi accept it and move on at least for sameer.

Sharon stopped in her tracks and it it hit her as all the past memories rushed back to her in a jolt

yesterday:

sharon was getting ready for her son sameer' s 4 birthday party. she checked her watch." why hasnt he come yet?the least he can do is message me . she pulled out her phone angrily and angrily punched in her husbands number. " swayam where are you ? Did you have to work on your son's birthday? you workaholic!" swayam was driving and he smiled at his wifes words." calm down my siren sharon. i am on my way" a cute blush formed on her cheeks. " okay stop talking on the phone and hang up. dont you know it is dangerous to talk and drive. a naughty idea popped into swayam's head." ok i will but first say i love you." sharon glanced at her surroundings there were many people around." no swayam not now" . " okay then even i wont hang up. " sharon got angry. "stop being so childish and hang up." swayam was not paying attention to anyone." no i wont until you... aaahhh..." she heard a bang and crash and then complete silence.

Flashback ends

sharon plopped onto the ground and let out a heart wrenching scream." SWAYAM! please dont leave me! why did you leave like that?" hearing this everyone felt a sense of relief and extreme sadness. hearing the commotion a 4 year old came out of his room and was shocked to see everyone crying." mamma.. where us papa ? is he coming back?". hearing this a heart broken sharon pulled sameer into tight hug." no papa wont back ...god decided he is too good for us and took him back." sameer wailed even more and embraced his mother with his tiny hands." but papa never really left us he is always in our hearts... never forget that." sharon felt her son nodding in her embrace.

25 years later:

sharon is dressed in a saree sitting on a chair and smiling proudly. Sameer was geeting married . she laughed when she saw him secretly holding his wife"s hand .she said to herself like she often does" he is just like you swayam.

The end.

There done hope you liked it and pls comment and hit like.

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sanjana_D3 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it ...
Very well written OS..with a different and sad concept
Is this your first swaron os ??
Do write some more on SwaRon soon 😊
and pm me when u do.
btw , amazing title
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanj.98

Loved it ...

Very well written OS..with a different and sad concept
Is this your first swaron os ??
Do write some more on SwaRon soon😊
and pm me when u do.
btw , amazing title



yup it is my first swaron story and i plan to write more soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very well written...just loved it... but i think their was little sad concept..but no load.. i loved the theme behind OS...Awesome job..
keep updating more stuffs...
prateek
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice os
very different, lovingly, md sad
bt i still love this os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suni1986

Nice os
very different, lovingly, md sad
bt i still love this os


thanks i wanted to try something new
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gosh!!! this was such an amazing os
i ha tears in my eyes at the end of the os
ur concept was so amazing
it was a brilliant piece of work
loved the title
👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: BusyIndivaBee

gosh!!! this was such an amazing os

i ha tears in my eyes at the end of the os
ur concept was so amazing
it was a brilliant piece of work
loved the title
👏



thank you so much. comments like this encourage me to write more 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: prateekdave7

Very well written...just loved it... but i think their was little sad concept..but no load.. i loved the theme behind OS...Awesome job..
keep updating more stuffs...
prateek



thanks alot 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sad, but touching, but cute os :-)

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