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riddzyee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

very nice and valid reasons i must say..its good to read such a nicely written and lovely post after an equally awesome and heartwarming episode.

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Sed_Dreamer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

i hardly reply on IF.. like RAREST OF RARE cases.. but this standout analysis of today's soulful episode calls for an applause.. been a fan of ur posts but didn reply earlier.. today i had to ..simply had to... so heres goes Ms. Epiphany... *Bowing down* 👏

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_bellaSwan_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

very well written post dear u penned it very beautifully as like as always .its a treat to read your post . yup u have explained it beautifully i also got tears in my eyes . when sharon was staring at swayam it was very heart touching moment .

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Ardour.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

So, I mentally slap myself for not seeing this place earlier but Epiphany, show some mercy on me, mate. I'm just a week away from my exams.

Getting back to the topic, the episode was cliche but perhaps one of its kind. Swayum is naive yet exceptionally mature. Glimpses of his character restrengthen my belief that he is a fictional chap indeed. His concern and affection for Sharon is quintessential to a Utopian swain.

I dunno whether I should laugh or not but these lines portray some good humour. 😆

So you cry, wondering how you ended up with that baby-like helluva boy who owns SUVs and penthouses but still sleeps on your couch like one of those people who sleep on the railway platforms because you got some temperature. Charming boy, I tell you.

Sharon's inner turmoil was evident through her eyes. Her helplessness does ache a bit but I do wonder, is that the way you proceed a story? Giving the protagonist a serious disease, like really? She needs to shed away her inhibitions and speak up to Swayum. Whenever there's a problem, there's always a solution and so there has to be a way out of these miseries.

The apples are yellowing and the boiled eggs have become boiled rubber balls. But your boyfriend does it all for you at the crack of dawn and leaves because he does not want you to feel awkward when you wake up with the perfect hairdo and eye-makeup in front of him. Sigh. But the attempts he makes, the efforts he'd put in to make you feel how much he loves you, they make you cry so hard through that smile the note and the arrows and the breakfast table leave you with.

^^Your sarcasm sparks up again.

Taani is too great a character to own a place in my heart. Still, I appreciate the elderly brother concern by Swayum. Point three is weird though.

Enough said, it's a perfectly crafted post. Well done, again. 👍🏼

Edited by nikita_arsha - 12 years ago

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Kankshita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

^^ All said and done, who likes Taani, anyway? 🤓

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Ardour.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: epiphany.
^^ All said and done, who likes Taani, anyway? 🤓

No one. Let's don't talk about it, anyway.

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Sonya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

No one can control such feeling specially when its something to do with this crazily cute lover boy of Sharon.

I simply the loved post.

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Phosphenes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

I'm forever late but you have to excuse me since I've been having my practicals. 🤓

You know what Kankshita? Every time I read your topics i just feel like hugging you. You're so damn awesome woman! :D <3

So yes, I've read this topic around 4-5 times and I love it , absolutely. Your way of expressing your happiness is pretty subtle. I like how you never let go of your trademark sarcasm and your '😳' emoticon even when you wanna describe the cuteness and the heart-warming rush of love in Swayam and Sharon's story. :D It is progressing at a rate like never before, touchwood for that. This stuff is straight outta a fan-fiction and the imaginations of us fans. But no one has made it a secret here that we're loving this dreams-coming-true scenario. Oh yes we are, very very much!

"The marks of the culmination of his adolescence are still there on his face, and his hair flies more often than yours. He rubs his palm on his face in his sleep to ease the itch and snuggles on the couch with his hands deep in the pockets of his sweatshirt. What is he, a baby? 😳 Well, maybe he is in his sleep. So you cry, wondering how you ended up with that baby-like helluva boy who owns SUVs and penthouses but still sleeps on your couch like one of those people who sleep on the railway platforms because you got some temperature. Charming boy, I tell you. So, you basically begin to cry really hard after you allow that one teardrop to leak because nothing you give him will ever be enough to repay his deep love and heed for you. 😳 Because what you are putting him through is the very last thing he'd ever deserve. Swell. "

Just say the guy is recklessly cute. Say it. 😈

I loves the 'owns SUVs and penthouses but still stays behind to look after his so-ill-that-he-has-no-idea lady love' who btw makes it look very amply clear that she does not want him. She does need him, and that look in her eyes whenever he takes care of her like that, that look. WHY doesn't Swayam ever catch that look?? :(

And the guy looks so awfully cute even in his sleep, for godssake. Tell him to have some shame. 😳

"The apples are yellowing and the boiled eggs have become boiled rubber balls."

I beg to differ very very much here. The apples and other fruits have been kept cut and presented in a very eye-pleasing manner. They're very much hale and hearty too. And the egg is very much normal, its NOT boiled rubber ball. The white has been shaped like a heart, for godssake.So it just gives a different look, i guess. Thoda to excuse kar diya karo maate. :P

The third point. I agree. It did tug at my heart, as much as i dont like the lady in the given scenario. But yeah. I understand where thats coming from. :)

Like everyone, I loved the SwaRon scene very much. Though I felt that if i were Sharon, I would've been so excited that I would've walked much more quickly following all the arrows. I felt Sharon was walking really slowly under all the excitement i imagine she must have been feeling. But maybe she was just very lovingly shocked and overwhelmed...anyway. Sorry for that^. :P

So your writing just flows and I'm in awe of it. Oh well. Just take this- 🤗