So, I mentally slap myself for not seeing this place earlier but Epiphany, show some mercy on me, mate. I'm just a week away from my exams.Getting back to the topic, the episode was cliche but perhaps one of its kind. Swayum is naive yet exceptionally mature. Glimpses of his character restrengthen my belief that he is a fictional chap indeed. His concern and affection for Sharon is quintessential to a Utopian swain.
I dunno whether I should laugh or not but these lines portray some good humour. 😆
So you cry, wondering how you ended up with that baby-like helluva boy who owns SUVs and penthouses but still sleeps on your couch like one of those people who sleep on the railway platforms because you got some temperature. Charming boy, I tell you.
Sharon's inner turmoil was evident through her eyes. Her helplessness does ache a bit but I do wonder, is that the way you proceed a story? Giving the protagonist a serious disease, like really? She needs to shed away her inhibitions and speak up to Swayum. Whenever there's a problem, there's always a solution and so there has to be a way out of these miseries.
The apples are yellowing and the boiled eggs have become boiled rubber balls. But your boyfriend does it all for you at the crack of dawn and leaves because he does not want you to feel awkward when you wake up with the perfect hairdo and eye-makeup in front of him. Sigh. But the attempts he makes, the efforts he'd put in to make you feel how much he loves you, they make you cry so hard through that smile the note and the arrows and the breakfast table leave you with.
^^Your sarcasm sparks up again.
Taani is too great a character to own a place in my heart. Still, I appreciate the elderly brother concern by Swayum. Point three is weird though.
Enough said, it's a perfectly crafted post. Well done, again. 👍🏼
Edited by nikita_arsha - 12 years ago
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