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Originally posted by: SwaRonforever

just one word for d OS- "SwaRonlicious"...dammm it's just perfect...me too imagined d same thing...
swayam will always remain swayam n Sharon yes me expects d same change in her as she was about to say ilu before she left for Delhi...
candy *hugs* do write more..it's beautiful

Originally posted by: swaron_pk

thanks and congrats for this wonderful OS .This OS increased my excitement for the swaron hope to see new sharon ASAP.keep writing👍🏼

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

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First of all i'm extremely Sry for unressin dis comment so lte... It ws an awesome os...⭐️ Jst superb...😃 Nd dis ws ur 1st os... Nd in d 1st nly bang on..👏 I absolutely Luvd d way u strtd d os... Swayam givin d final basket nd winnin d match...😳 Ha.. I so wish CVs show sumthng lyk dis... Nd wen Swayam realised sharon ws dere... It ws awesomely written... His shock. His happiness... Jst awesome..😳 Nd he felt ecstatic... Pehle to he won d match nd now sharon z here... He wud b burstin wit happiness... Nd u beautifully penned down Swayam's 1st reaction on seein sharon..."I could never really get enough of her beauty. There was something about her that took my breath away,every single time I looked at her. Her beautiful brown-grey eyes shone with amusement as she looked at me. There was a small smile playing on her pink lips. Her hair fell around her shoulders in soft waves. She wore a pale white dress which highlighted her honey-colored skin. I saw little pink blotches rise up on her cheeks as she blushed at how I was gazing at her. I took a step closer to her. " 😳😳Dis part was jst gr8... He can Nvr resist bt b amazed by her beauty evry he watches her nd lyk alwys he drowned in her eyes...😉 Swayam's emotions wre perfectly ptryd... Nd alas he hugged her..☺️☺️. It wud hav been rly odd if he didnt... After all d months of seperation dat z sumthng expected of our majnu.. Don knw wat our onscreen majnu wl do..😳😳😳 .Nd i Luvd it.. I Luvd how he gave sharon d gift... Well sharon came after so many days nd majnu uske Liye Kuch na kare.. Nd wen sharon said "i mis u too" nd d hug dat followed i ws transported to swaronland..."She looked up at me,still smiling and asked,"Why do you always look at me like that Swayam?". "Like how?" I asked smiling in return. "You know...'.like'...",she said and I could see that she was struggling to find the right words. "Like you're the only person around,like I cant' seem to focus on anyone or anything else? Like as if you look more and more beautiful to me with each passing minute?", I asked trying to help her out. She nodded slowly at me. "Well its simple", I said as I shrugged,"Its because I love you". Her eyes widened in amusement and she looked down at the floor blushing again. I clenched my fists and held them tight to my sides as I stopped my arms from wrapping themselves around her again. Damn, why was it so hard to control myself today??" i was jst amzed at dis part... dis ws jst outstandin... U gave us so many beautiful scenes... Dis os had jst d right amount of romance...😊 U kept deir trial relationship in mind nd penned d os perfectly...👍🏼D bit hesitation d excitement d love... In short it ws jst amazin... Dat ws really a gr8 os...😊 Lvd readin it... Do write mre.. Nd pm me ur works... nd once again a fantastic os...⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: tanha29

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Oh my god. This was one of the best OS's I have ever read. So simple yet so beautiful!
His happiness, her ecstasy, their togetherness..Lovely...
Frankly, I could visualize the whole thing inside my mind. SwaRon staying together is the best possible thing we can think of at the moment. Here, while each and every SwaRon fan is waiting for Sharon to come back, you came up with an one shot like this..I wish CVs come up with this kind of track too.. Seriously. Would love to see Sharon and Swayam on screen like this..
Secondly, I am glad that you didn't let go off their characters. We have always known Swayam as the boy next door and the ultimate majnu. He is so involved in her that she is the only one who is enough for him. The poor boy thought that he was imagining his love until Simmi told that she is here. And despite the trophy ceremony, he went to search for her. I guess, he got a bigger award when he saw Sharon. Her confession 😊His love for her will never die, come what may. He will always love her with the same intensity!!And it's even better when the feelings are mutual. I loved the way you described that he was finding it so tough to control himself, especially in front of her. And the way, she was making him more and more "unable to resist himself" ...Aww..I am in my SwaRon land!!Hugs to you for writing such a beautiful OS! It depicts our SwaRon beautifully! 🤗
P.S is this your first OS? I doubt 😉
Please please write more!!! Wonderful swaronilicious OS..I could go on praising you..Please write more..
-Mihika 😛

Originally posted by: candybar

Aawww thank you so much Mihika 🤗

this means a lot😳 I could have never done justice to this OS had I drifted away from Swayam's and Sharon's original characteristics. I thought it was best to keep them like they were in the show now. I'm glad you liked it😳 I loved how you have described Swayam's emotions in your reply too😊

And yes this definitely is my first OS😃

I'll surely try to write more😳 Thank you so much for appreciating my work🤗

Originally posted by: tanha29

I was actually short of words. I loveeeddd your OS!!Beautiful piece of work 😊