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sharadhi

@candybar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sanj.98
WOW...it doesnt seem lyk this is ur first OS...u write lyk a professional 😛...❤️ the way u portrayed swayams excitement...

Thank You😳

No this really is my first time😛

Thanks again😳 I loved writing about this side of Swayam😊

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Awesome os
Hope I still will like the sharon comeback in show after reading this.Swayam's excitement after hearing that sharon is back,we got our old majnu back.Swaron hug remind me of their dance camp hug soo beautifull n full of love.
Loved it

Thank you soo much😊😳

Ya man, even I hope the new Sharon is good and we get to see some cute little SwaRon moments from now on.😊

Originally posted by: nami2811
This one is wonderfully written! I loved d way you described Swayam's feelings.. I actually visualized everything u wrote n m waiting for the actual episode like hell! My expectations have increased manifold n hope to c atleast 1/10th of itin d actual episode.. Thank you so much for writing this :)

Thank you for reading it and liking it so much😳 Means a lot😳

I'm extremely excited too. Waiting for our SwaRon to kick start again😃

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@Anonymous--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Edited

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/72225057

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Edited : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3356558&PID=72232770&#72232770 😳

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Unres
Oh my god. This was one of the best OS's I have ever read. So simple yet so beautiful!
His happiness, her ecstasy, their togetherness..Lovely...
Frankly, I could visualize the whole thing inside my mind. SwaRon staying together is the best possible thing we can think of at the moment. Here, while each and every SwaRon fan is waiting for Sharon to come back, you came up with an one shot like this..I wish CVs come up with this kind of track too.. Seriously. Would love to see Sharon and Swayam on screen like this..
Secondly, I am glad that you didn't let go off their characters. We have always known Swayam as the boy next door and the ultimate majnu. He is so involved in her that she is the only one who is enough for him. The poor boy thought that he was imagining his love until Simmi told that she is here. And despite the trophy ceremony, he went to search for her. I guess, he got a bigger award when he saw Sharon. Her confession 😊His love for her will never die, come what may. He will always love her with the same intensity!!And it's even better when the feelings are mutual. I loved the way you described that he was finding it so tough to control himself, especially in front of her. And the way, she was making him more and more "unable to resist himself" ...Aww..I am in my SwaRon land!!Hugs to you for writing such a beautiful OS! It depicts our SwaRon beautifully! 🤗
P.S is this your first OS? I doubt 😉
Please please write more!!! Wonderful swaronilicious OS..I could go on praising you..Please write more..
-Mihika 😛

Edited by tanha29 - 12 years ago

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@__anonymous__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

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sharadhi

@candybar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha
amazing

Thank you😳😊

Originally posted by: muzzy_sk
RES. Read but too sleepy too give a proper comment will UN-RES ASAP! :D Maybe tomorrow,good night :D

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Wanted to give a aacha sa proper comment ,sorry to make you wait for this long. 😳

We don't usually open random works on forums + didn't want to get hopes high with Sharon coming back. But dude, SO glad we dropped by. 😃

coming to the OS, WOW! *bows down*.

The way your described their victory and boys crushing him! nicely done.:)
It hit me then. My heart stopped beating and I felt my jaw drop to the ground. I whipped back around looking for those eyes again,but,they were gone. I scanned the whole crowd, praying for my guess to be true,praying for another glimpse of those eyes,and the beautiful face that held those eyes. But I couldn't find her anywhere.
This is SO majnu!. our Swayam!!..

The way he rushed to Simmi and Rinni and then looking for Sharon all around the campus.Khash aisa sach mei hota!!. and then his disappointment ki he was just hallucinating and then Sharon coming there!. Haaye, this is SO our SwaRon! :D

The hug and then his sheepish look because he was embarrassed
The gift and then "Miss you" =)
and then at last leaving hand before entering the BB court!. SO Sharon!!.

Loved the fact that you didn't change anything about the characters.

We don't usually give this big comments, but then had to write for this one!. This is OS is Awesome described, each and everything could be pictured and honestly we could see whole of the OS like a motion picture while reading.and we aren't saying this to please you or anything but seriously ,it was great.Even If CV's show a little bit of this, on Sharon return, we are gonna be Super Happy! 😃 😃.

Continue writing more :D. and please PM if you do.😃

-Shreya and Kanishtha

Gosh, Thank You sooo much Shreya and Kanishtha😳 Your reply means a lot😊 I'm really glad you felt this OS was worth reading and liked it this much😊 I'll surely try writing more and will let you know when I do😳

Originally posted by: sanstina
Awesome OS 😊

Thanks a lot😳😊

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sharadhi

@candybar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: MagicalShantanu
Res . . . . . .( gonna unres tomorrow after I get some breathing air from my piles of books )

The username candybar on IF effortlessly composes me to grin pleasingly . . . Welcome Back Sharadhi . . . Welcome back to ur known avatar . . . .

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Ok. . . without any further stretching I'm letting myself immersed into the glittery & thoroughly scintillating fairyland of ur OS . . Sharadhi - GOSH . . . Are u even acknowledged of ur own cerebral Majesty & Excellency . . . How Accomplished & Luminous writer u are . . . If I term this OS just as Brilliant or Awesome , then my creepy conscience will torn me from inside with peaked toxic resentment . .It was - D-I-V-I-N-E . . for the crafted presentation of boundlessly tender anecdotes of Passionate-love-boy Swayam . .equaled with the ardently etched not-so-creamy yet wavy lustrous Diva Sharon . . .and their Heavenly- breeze-hovering-serrated-but-soothing faitytale . . . . S-I-G-H . . . . This so like our own SwaRon . . . and trust me Sharadhi, the designation of this "our own SwaRon" caters me so much blissfulness . . .I'm numb to pen down . . . . Bows Down in thankfulness , girl . . .for providing this "our own SwaRon" to us . . . .👏

And again I can scream in some endearing tone - this is why I consider u one of the Best writers of IF far before my registration into India forums . .😳 . . Ur posts never cease to sweep me off my feet . . . NEVER . . . . Hats of Dear . . . . Thanks a TON for being BACK with a BANG . . . . 👏

Whoa Whoa Whoa Turin sweetheart...so many heavy adjectives! I kinda went breathless reading all of it.😆 I'm seriously not worthy of all these beautiful words you've used on me. There have been tons of much more amazing OS's than this before😊

But anyway, thank you so very much for taking time out to read it and liking it so much. Yes, it was a deliberate effort to keep Swayam and Sharon true to their characters and not bring about any illogical changes in them. I was happy to portray them this way. 😳

Once again,thank you for all this wonderful reply. Your own reply is written so well. I don't know why you yourself haven't really begun writing something yet😳 I really wish I you would write something here too😊

Thnaks again though. Lots of Love🤗

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flirteyed

@flirteyed

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING!!!
I could go on and on sayin dis after reading dis awesome OS :D
I wish, i so wish dis cud happen for real! Bt i know it wont! Stil having a feeling dat CVs wont disappoint us dis tym :)

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sharadhi

@candybar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: shreyasi28
AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING!!!
I could go on and on sayin dis after reading dis awesome OS :D
I wish, i so wish dis cud happen for real! Bt i know it wont! Stil having a feeling dat CVs wont disappoint us dis tym :)

Thank you sooo much Shreyasi😳🤗

Ya man, they better not disappoint us this time. I'm quite optimistic this time. Don't know where it'll lead to though😕

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purvi

@-dark.horse-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

just one word for d OS- "SwaRonlicious"...dammm it's just perfect...me too imagined d same thing...
swayam will always remain swayam n Sharon yes me expects d same change in her as she was about to say ilu before she left for Delhi...
candy *hugs* do write more..it's beautiful