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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

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Edited by Illyria - 12 years ago

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

pehle toh i never thot ki yeh aisa wala 18+ hoga...

but i loved it...

u know the way u used those terms... angvastram...

it added a different aura arnd it... u know like sort of medieval times...

like they show in dances nah... ekdum vaise...

so i can literally imagine what was going on... and i am so happy for that ... non-d3 KR rocks...

maine abhi jab shaant ki saath pheel ke saath padha... i am telling u... it was such a beautiful sight to imagine...

just perfect di...

perfect choice of words... to the point word usage...

such a powerful artistry... ;)

the way he proceeded towards her... how she was nervous... how they mated everything... just a beauty di...

like how he held her... how he wanted to devour her... how for kria evrything was just like it was happening first time...

how for them each touch was new... just perfect...

the way how rey chose everything...

u know the cryptic feelings... how his eyes showed it out all... then how kria was so nervous... how she was u know sorta cursing types... like bhavnayein samjho...

then the perfect dance poise u describing abt he bringing her to him... then devouring her... too good di...

then mirror ke paas ka scene... that was one amazing creation di...

how she hid... how he made her face him... then how she hugged him... then the word usage there for the mirror thingy... that was breathtaking... u know she felling him...

then that kiss... i mean seriously... that was pure bliss di...

finally they mated... and really loved it... par usne thoda sa hi torture kiya... he shud have done more... a longer OS wud have been the result...

but anyways... then they... finally... totally awesome... amazing... a beauty... especially the vocab u used for it... that was just fab di...

plus the way u described the feelings... OMG di... was beautiful...

mujhe best part toh the way u descibed their actions and reaction .. how they were speaking thru eyes... and the sophisticated paryayvachi of dhoti...

prodigious OS di...

Edited by kriyansh24 - 12 years ago

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Me Second !!! yey ! 😉 !

Okay i Love you ! I love you ! I love you !

The start ! uff ! Loved it ..

ps: u need to count how much i use letter "Love " in the comment 🤣 🤣

The description in start ! azure green eye's , glassy with want !.. God i literally can't explain how much i Love it !

And from where the hell you get the idea's of using the word "Angvastram " lol .. it's been now more than 1 year since we met and i'm a big fan of your writing skill's since then 😈 .

You know i decided to comment simultaneously while reading each part ! But here i go , i couldn't stop my self from reading it whole ! and then commenting ! :P

Failed !

Again failed to resist falling for them !

Kriyansh ! it's perfect ! Way to perfect ! Way to the highest order of Deep Love ..

Still i remember how we loved then in start and there is no change in our feeling's , we are still the same ! Kriyansh is still the same ! and no one can ever led our spirit's down !

Shit ! , I'm paralyzed !

Breathless .

Spellbound.

Numb.

I dunno in which word's i should thank you !

I love it !

I love you !

I mean just perfect , Have no word's rite now to actually express the excited state of mine's !

Love it !!!

Damn ! freaking hawt os !

Like your description !!!! Hell ! Killer ! ... and on the top the song !

vese sachchi bolu i heard this song for the first time ! 😕 and loved it 😳 ☺️

Love you !!

love you !!!

muah !

🤗

- " U "

Edited by upasna_mishti - 12 years ago

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

diii!!!!!!!!! ye to sab OS ka baap tha
hahaha super duper hawwt n sexy
hayeee!!!!! i m toh blushing all da tym while reading it ☺️ ☺️

you knw wht wen vaishu told me dat you writing dis OS
i was dancing in someone's xcitdly
evn i dnt knw da name of bride n groom 😛

n n n...dam i love last line which you dedicated to palki matte 🤣 🤣 🤣
you seriously dare to her 😆

i just love dis song re
bt promo eewwweee i dnt want to see it

n now i m proudly gonna say
MY ROMANCE QUEEN is back 😉
seriously soo beautifully you describe evryting ki anand aa gya 😉

ps: mera wo desi boys concept wala to yaad h na apko OS..hehe 😛

Edited by shaffy_arsha - 12 years ago

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

you guys were waiting that badly?

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

😛
unres...
first let me calm down...
m sweating like nything...
vo b december me...
*deep breath*...
firstly abt the promo
mene ab tak promo nai dekha...
n seriously i don even want to...
but i read in IF k there is some so called hot scene
been used on that couple wats the name of that couple...emmm...forget it who cares...
this was THE HOTTESTEST OS i have ever read..
n i jus love this song...
i listen this song almst everyday...
now coming to OS...
i mean it was like killer...
i don have words...
m speechless...
n i m sure that palki cant even think to touch this...
awsm awsm awsm...
thnx 4 the pm...

Edited by anjee_007 - 12 years ago

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

OMG Diii. . . . . .
This was "THE HAWWWTESTTT OS"
i have read till now. . . .
Amazing. . . . . . .
And tat song,
its awsome,
u knw aftr seeing tat promo,i was totaly heart broken,
and wen ever i listend to dis song i felt as if sum1 is crushing my heart vry badly,
bt,now aftr reading dis os,i happly listen dis song,
and always will do it. . . .
Thanks 4 dis awsome os,
and thanks a lottt. . .
U realy dnt have an idea how happy i m,
thank u,
thank u,
thank u. . . .
Thank u,
thank u,
thank u,
thank u. . . .
Thank u,
thank u,
thank u'
thank u. . . . .

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago