Forever and ever - SwaRon OS , 2nd part page-8

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Sakshi Shah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

❤️ly... AWEAUM...thnk god it did not have a bad ending...!!

Sakshi...

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

tanuka this was really beautifully penned...

i thought you are giving it a tragedy end but *sigh* u dint...it somewhere reminded be about the walk to remember story..

nicely put up OS..

thanks for the pm..

sorry for being late, was inactive...

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Jum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Whoa! tanuka! I nearly was being driven dumbstruck regarding Swayam's death!! Babygirl, You nearly Killed me!! Oh My Gosh! from the beginning i thought wow! what a Pleasant-full Os, and what a Mood came over me, to nicely read it Out! :D believe me, i loved the entire story from the first! But as soon as the phone rang, I first hoped it to be Swayam, but after the line that enabled, 'With a different ID' even i had a strange feeling on whats happening, But whoa! What was that!??! After that line, believe me I felt like as if i went on a BUMPY ride, the story shifted from being so Pleasant and Presentable, into a '''OMG! WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NOW!?!?" situation! That was a Hell of a wonderful tale, till the thought of the Phone call! then very soon, I grew Very tensed in the next update on whats going to happen, after she rushed into the Hospital, and then i think i felt calmed down a bit when She banged her heads to her hands! and slept that night! then on the next day, It was a wonderful Idea, to show how the marriage Going to be happening in the Hospital ! Its like the FIrst time Hospital Marriage Story i've ever read !! :D
and i wish the Story continued! but Hated to see the "THE END" part! :( !! and Loved the Whole story line, of when sharon was about to confess swayam as his wife! and immediately something happens to swayam !! and then i seriously could feel the situation !! and i felt seriously tensed that whether swayam was really going to die! or something! or not! or what! i dont know but i was just tensed after the part when the doctors came out with a straight face! i felt ok! maybe he might be alright!! gosh ! if he is gone! i felt where and what the hell can sharon do without him! its like they are the ORIGINAL piece of romeo and Juliet!! :-) Or even Better!
And the last Passionate kiss! Made me feel waaay Relieved!! :D :D
Hoping to see more works of u babygirl! :D :D
And so so so so so sorry for being late! :(
you know the whole reason !! about my stupid freaking Nasty pm box!! :( and schedules! :(
Anyways! :D
LOVED THE OS!! :D

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