Forever and ever - SwaRon OS , 2nd part page-8

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

RES

UNRES

Tanuka🤗

Firstly a tightest hug to you, for not killing Swayam, I was hell scared for that ever since you told me that you were thinking of killing him. But phew!!

Coming to the update beautifully done with a scared to the core Sharon running to the hospital as soon as she heard the news.

Nothing can be worse than to hear about love of your life struggling with his life.

Could feel the pain she was going through, heart wrenching indeed.

I loved the marriage that she arranged in the hospital itself, borrowing the old couple's ring for a while, how sweet!!!

And the end super sweet thereby giving us a fairytale ending

Edited by Rutu - 12 years ago

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

I would have appreciated both a sad and happy ending but it's always nice to have SwaRon reunite in the end !! Really sweet OS !!

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Edited on the same page

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swa-ron

@swa-ron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

awesome

tnx a lot for changing ur ending

cuz if u hadnt i dont know wat wud happen to my sleep tonyt

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Tanuka🤗

Beautifully written girl. Sharon's inner turmoil, her grief and sorrow was very well depicted. You did scare me out with the beginning but as they say all's well that ends well. I loved how you captured the emotions into phrases. The wedding idea was also enchanting. Thanks for giving us such a lovely OS.

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Payal

@sweetangelpayal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

**Dances around**

Yayee..you didnt kill him.. even though u had planned to...am so proud of all d ppl who pleaded/begged/threatened u not to kill him...😆

This part was another awesome read. the line i loved d most was something that went lyk she searched for his room in the maze of the hospital. it really depicted her state well, the words maze of the hospital depicting her own confused state of mind. (i hav no clue since wen I started analysing stuff lyk dis..guess its d way u hav written)😉

And d way she brought d rings, was awww...

You know wen he was in d ICU i was lyk wad...noo...in full on dramatic mode...

phew, glad he was safe...

And beautiful ending, especially d last words by Swayam touched my heart...Gosh swayam, y sooo cute!!!!☺️

Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago

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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Just Love ur work dear ❤️

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jasleen

@jas_ArSha_MaNan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

wow
awesome update yaar
keep it up
my god when the updtae started my heart started beating
and as i proceeded my heart was beating and beating
i loved it
it was wonderful
keep up the good work

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

wow... that was a lovely os...

well i guess it has to be lovely when its fr swaron...

a gr8 update wid perfect ending.

luved it.

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

luved it beautiful, emotional os with perfect ending... 👏
"Even if I am not there Sharon . I'll always love you ,forever and always . Forever and ever"
do write more!! 😊

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