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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

The OS seemed to be a happy one in the initial reading the OS's title. the first half of the OS was much of a lovey-dovey stuff which made me grin throughout. The proposal made a pleasure read, SwaRon being childhood friends added to the charm. The event was well described with peculiar picturesque. The cliffhanger is intriguing . Hope it doesn't end on a sad note. Thanks for the PM.

Looking forward to the next part.

P.S:Now you shall update the next part soon.

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

awesome OSn hospital😕

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Mahirah

@Mahirah

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

OMG this is an awesome OS Tanuka 👏 very nicely and perfectly written 😃 you should definitely write more on SwaRon would love to read your stuff on SwaRon😳

and do update soon and dont forget to pm me 😉

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: pratik54000
Heyo Big Monster ( my dear tannu) first of all thats really very nice ke tumne mishty aur deepu ke kehne par ye OS likha...and yes thank you for the dedication...it really feels nice to see you remember all your friends...and we love you too dear... Always monster 😃

now comming back to the os...it waa really very beautiful os but ended on cliff hanger thats was not good at all...itna chota sa update kyu tha yar...i wanted to read more... wait for the next part 😛

the start was really lovely indicating a pretty girl waiting for her fiance and all the cute things associated with that...you explained all the with awesome cuteness yar...

than the part where you showed a conversation of sharon and that old waitress was the best part in that update...i so loved that...sharon a cute fience loved to see that...the proposal part was particularly good and i loved it...the way swayam was shown going all week on his knees to propose sharon...but finally he went on his knees to propose sharon and the reaction of sharon there...everything was just outsatnding in that...

and than sharon got call and we came to know that swayam has occured an accident and is in hospital so it was utterly shocking to hear that...and than tumne chod diya puri baat bataye bina thats really not good...please please update soon yar...

thanks for the pm...loved this first part of os to the core...do update soon...

Pratik...(Chota Monster)

P.S. i hope i have covered all the points perfectly...and yes i am sorry i.am not the first one to comment on this beautiful write up...

A very big thank u for the long and elaborate comment monster .

loved ur reply .😳

I am really glad u liked it .

yes for sure covered all the points in the os and its okay .

Thnak u very much 😃

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: nikita_arsha

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It's an awesome OS with a profoundly intriguing plot. Beautifully penned down, must say. I liked the idea of Swayum and Sharon being engaged to each other. The opening stanzas had me smiling like an idiot but when I reached the end, I was like oh, it's sad. This needs to be continued girl. Looking forward to the next part.😊

Thanks a lot Nikita 😳

yeah this os sure has a 2nd part to it , so wait for it .

Originally posted by: frankyfio
awesome start

pls pm me when u update e next part

Thank u fiona 😊

Originally posted by: Joshua_TANHA

Loved the OS ..

I love how sharon "patiently " waited for swayam from 7 to 9 😆 siren sharon se ye wali sharon different hai 😉

I had smile on my face while reading the OS untill the mega twist

Waiting for the next update

Thanks Joshua 😊

will update the next part soon..

Originally posted by: shaani2209
nice plot...surely do continue...sorry m in hurry...will give a long comment on the later updates...thanks for the pm...

Thanks Shaani 😊

will update the next part soon..

Originally posted by: tejukor
Awesome yaar tanu but bohot chotu tha n m angry that u never pm me...iss baar maaf ker rahi hu...but next time dont even dare to do such mistake other wise me kya karungi yeh dekh lena...open threatening ker rahi hu...just joking...but plzzz pm me next time.just loved it n waiting for next part...

Thanks for the comment😊

sorry i missed out on u , next time se i will never forget , promise .

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
Hey Swthrt🤗 Deepu di 🤗

I am so happy to see this OS finally ...thanx for considering my request dear...i love your writing style...its simple..sweet yet have a different charisma to it ... bohat zada tareef kardi apne 😳 , thanks .

Coming to the OS...u captivated me from the very beginning ...when she was waiting for him and looking at his picture which was her wallpaper...awww

His hazel brown eyes and angelic smile on my wallpaper warmed my heart and i could feel a smile creeping up on my face .

The convo with the elderly waitress was beautifully described...the way she admitted they knew each other since childhood...diaper days...so cute ...

And when Swayam the popular guy proposed her ..even he was shy ...awww...

So beautifully you described his proposal and confession...

He got up and put a beautiful ring on my finger , I looked up into his brown capativating eyes and couldn't just see pure love but my whole future in them.😳😳❤️

The End of this chapter was intriguing ...he is in hospital..i hope things will be better ..soon...i am eager to read the next part...plz update soon swthrt...

PS- Thanx for the dedication swthrt...luv u ...😳

Luv..
Ur Di

Thanks a lot di for such a lovely comment .

it was really nice to see u quoting ur fav lines 😊

will update the next part soon..

love u .

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: sweetangelpayal
goes into melo dramatic mode...
dont kill him..plz./...nooo...nahhhiii..plz dont...uaaa😭 I am gonna try my best not to kill him .

comes bak to normal mode...😳

dis was a really nice plot. her convo wid d woman, especially wen she said dat dey both knw each other since d tym dey were in diapers made me go awww...

I could relate the feelings she went through at the moment wen she got the call, really well. It wasnt overly done, yet it had d required emotion.

Plus, the bad weather seemed lyk a sign to her of something bad which was to happen, and which did happen. So basically all d minute details did help in building up the whole scene beautifully.

plz cont dis soon. lyk super soon.😃😃

Thanks for the lovel comment payal .😳

I am glad u liked it .😃

will surelu update the next part soon..

Originally posted by: Aashu14
Wow nice OS.. I like d concept of engagement and the scene was romantic and nice..
But u gave d good story a shocking pause.. Oh can't wait 4 next... Plz update quick..

Thanks 😳

Originally posted by: an_skyfighter
awesome start but why did u stop there
plz dont kil swayam in this one

Thanks 😳

swayam dead or not , u just have to wait for the next part .

Originally posted by: pooja123456
do continue...
waiting to read more!!
thanks for the pm ans do continue to do so!!
update soon!!!

Thanks 😳

will update the next part soon.

Originally posted by: --Rose--
Wow its Awesome:-):-)

Thanks 😳

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Awesome
Starting was cute sharon waiting for swayam n i really liked the idea of swaron being engaged.Then her n caroline convo where she told her that they meet when they were in diapers literally..:p.It was soo dam adorable.
Waiting for next part now
Update it ASAP

Thanks a lot sadiya 😃

yeh wali sharon different thi apni siren wali sharon se 😛

yeah will update the next part ASAP.

Originally posted by: Rutu
Nice plot for the OS
SwaRon engaged that's cool

But the end part

Continue soon

Thanks for the PM

Thanks Rutu 😊

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Loved the way Sharon talked about Swayam and herself to the waitress and it had to stop with the news of Swayam's accident ?? Please update the next chapter soon !!

thanks for commenting Abby.

will update the next part soon.

Originally posted by: jas112
hey hi
first of all i must say that your writting skills are awesome
i love ur writting style
my writting style is to faar faar behind ur writting style
and the update is very nice
i loved the plot do continue with it and pm me

Thanks a lot for the comment Jas .

dont say like that , i am just a newbie at writing , I am no good 😳

will surely update soon.

Originally posted by: Neeti96
Res :(

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OMG this OS was so sweet and romantic except the ending😭
SwaRon had a perfect love story, right from their childhood how cute!!😳
And the part where she spoke to Catherine was really sweet!
And Swayam the popular guy was shy to propose to her!😆
The marriage proposal was uber romantic!❤️
Loved it
But the ending
Continue soon!!!!!!

Thanks for the comment Neeti .😊

loved how u used all the emoticons and explained how u felt throughout the OS.

will update the next part soon..

Originally posted by: Nehal92
Hey Tanuka

very beautifully penned down..but the last part left me struck! :P

plz girl i so dont want it to be a sad OS!

Thanks Nehal 😊

will try by best not to kill swayam.

Originally posted by: Jyoti93
Lovely os sharon's convo with that waitress was vry sweet and the flashback was adorable bt swayam ka accident i hope evrything goes Well update soon

Thanks Jyoti for the comment 😊

Originally posted by: sw1234
Good start yar nice.do continue loved it.swaron bonding is very good.sharon blushing in the mention of swayam name.

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
TAnuuu🤗 pehle jhappi le, bahuth dino ke baad. Yaar it is really a very sweet update, awww swayam proposing sharon hayeee❤️ The convo btween the caroine and sharon was so cute, sharon telling about swayam is a treat to read, her blushes and all so lovely. But end mai swayam in the hospital 🥺 I cant bear it tanu.😭Well let me tell you, you are one fantastic writer, tere pehle OS too was super sweet and full on romantic, but this one has got the features of a blockbuster film, thodi, love, frndship and motherly afftection, then later on suspense. But it is an heartbreaking suspense that makes us readers spellbound. 😳 The best part was sharon look on to her iphone and saw swayam's face and her description about him So narrative and so much emitions are portrayed at one stretch. WOW👏⭐️ jaldi continue karna ji...

Suks 🤗

thanks for such a cute comment 😃

will try my level best to save swayam .

itna tareef mat kar re 😳

yeh OS aur blockbuster film 😲 tu bhi na ..

yeah will update the next part soon..

Love u .

Edited by Tanuka_TanHa - 12 years ago

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: pri_swaron

Wow lovely start!! Do update soon

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: AmRiTa_S
U are pretty good Tanuka...lovely start..love how she managed to wait for Swayam without getting hyper..lagta hai humari wali Sharon se thodi different Sharon hai 😆 They are together since they were in diapers aww..childhood sweethearts 😊 And accident..hope he is alright. Update soon..thnx for the PM. 😊

Thanks a lot Amu di 😃

she managed coz yeh wali sharon was different from our siren wali sharon 😉

will surely update soon..

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva
Fab os...nice beginning...update soon...

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Anindita91

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unres

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awesome os tanuka...brilliantly described...swaron r childhood buddies...wow...n swayam is so sweet...he almost wetted his pant to propose her...awww...shuch a chutie phie...the way a smile crept on sharon's face seeing his wallpaper in the beginning was amazing...caroline is a sweet person...its good that she let her sit there for some time more...but i am shocked after reading the last part where mandy gave Sharon that shocking news...that swayam is in hospital...plz plz plz dear update the next part soon...will be waiting for it eagerly...update ASAP...

Anindita 🤗

you were the one who pestered me the most to write this OS and I am glad u liked it.

yeah will surely update the next part ASAP..

Originally posted by: shravani97
Nice start...
Aww...Swayam and Sharon are childhood friends...
Loved the way Sharon waited for Swayam for 2 hours without getting angry...
Everything was perfect in this update...
Loved it to the core...😃

Thanks a lot Shravani for the comment 😊

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95
wow
update next soon

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Ananya.SwaRon
The OS seemed to be a happy one in the initial reading the OS's title. the first half of the OS was much of a lovey-dovey stuff which made me grin throughout. The proposal made a pleasure read, SwaRon being childhood friends added to the charm. The event was well described with peculiar picturesque. The cliffhanger is intriguing . Hope it doesn't end on a sad note. Thanks for the PM.
Looking forward to the next part.

P.S:Now you shall update the next part soon.

Thanks a lot for the comment Ananya 😃

yeah will surely update now 😉

Originally posted by: nature2
awesome OS n hospital😕

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Mahirah
OMG this is an awesome OS Tanuka 👏 very nicely and perfectly written 😃 you should definitely write more on SwaRon would love to read your stuff on SwaRon😳
and do update soon and dont forget to pm me 😉

Thanks a lot Mahirah😃

will surely try and write more on SwaRon.

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK
Tanuka 🤗

Thanks for the dedication gal 😳 means a lot and to know i am not completely forgotten is like sweet candy 😳

But gal did you have to end it like that..and now i realize how bad readers would have felt when i stop my work at point like this..but i also understand that its the best for the pace of second update..but you have to promise me to update soon.

Now coming to the start of the update - i had the same smile playing on my lips as in Sharon..the reference that you used, the pic of his calming Sharon - was nicely done.

Do update soon..

Sudha 🤗

pagal hai kya ?? you will never be forgotten , u are one of my very close friends here on IF , love u 😃

I know cliffhangers are always bad , yeah we used to feel the same way 😆

thanks a lot for the comment , I happy that u liked it .

I always wait for ur comments on my work .😊

yeah promise will update the next part soon..

Originally posted by: mili1987
a very good start...
nice OS...loved it👏

please update soon...don't keep it pending for tooo long...its a request 😊😊😊

Thanks a lot 😊

Edited by Tanuka_TanHa - 12 years ago

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Tanuka 🤗

Thanks for the dedication gal 😳 means a lot and to know i am not completely forgotten is like sweet candy 😳

But gal did you have to end it like that..and now i realize how bad readers would have felt when i stop my work at point like this..but i also understand that its the best for the pace of second update..but you have to promise me to update soon.

Now coming to the start of the update - i had the same smile playing on my lips as in Sharon..the reference that you used, the pic of his calming Sharon - was nicely done.

Do update soon..

Edited by Sudha-SK - 12 years ago